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Seth Alberts is a young scientist of the Phantom Industries, the world's leading developer in the fields of medicine, agriculture, engineering and modern weaponry. Almost futuristic compared to the current technologies, unknown organizations have repeatedly tried to invade and eventually succeeded in infiltrating the island of the Phantom. Seth, in the midst of escaping, accidentally forces his way into another world that is full of mysteries unexplainable by natural science.

 

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This story is worth 5 stars, Idea is not unique, but author conveys it very well.

Characters are realistic unique and likeable.

Sidecharacters doesn't revolve araund MC, so it's a plus.

Writing is above average, even while it's first authors story, and I myself read hundreds of them, I easily read all 15 chapters, without ability to stop, and now I am waiting for more.

Grammar is ok, And there are no Typos.

To sum it all up, this story is worth your time, it is one of the better here on rrl.