The Unknown Goddess: A Naruto Fan-Fic

by Archer__Phoenix

Fan Fiction ONGOING Action Adventure Romance Female Lead Strong Lead
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Life is unexpected after all. Unexpected and mysterious. You never know what could happen. Even so people have certain expectations. Things in the line of reality. Things that could actually happen. Simple things. Like being a doctor when you grow up. Or winning the lottery. Becoming the president. These are all things that are within the line of reality. What isn't in that line is waking up in a forest in the middle of nowhere with short term memory loss. Even more impossible is finding out that you went from 15 years old to 5 years old. The impossibilities keep on going. Not only did she wake up in a forest, find out she was five and suffered from short term memory loss,she somehow stumbled upon the gate to the leaf village. 

The line of reality had completely shatte red

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Soooo, I have this story posted on webnovel by the same name and image, feel free to check it out over there if you wish. I also have the same user name and profile pic. 

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TheHolyMage
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Tbh i don't realy read fanfics all that much, but this one does put a smile on my face.

Love the Mc and her brutal honesty and i am very very curious about her past aswell that made her so Jaded (can't think of the right word this seems close enough).

I realy love the interactions with the other members of the cast, especialy with naruto. lots of feel goods here.

Read 20 chapters so far and can say that i will absolutly be checking daily for updates.

Very Good work Auther keep it up :)

I would def reccomend that everyone reads it, lots of feel good moments aswell between Mc and the rest of the cast. 10/10

friendofcatgod
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Love its my fav novel/fainfic ive read. i cant wait for more updates. 10/10 would suggest you read.

Daitengu
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Best Naruto fan fic I've read.

Reviewed at: Chapter 50

I've read quite a few fics, including naruto ones. Most don't really bring anything new to the table, just wish fulfillment. This one has an OP character as well, but battle and by extention the Opness isn't the focus. Athena, the MC, has solid problems, and organically works them out over time. It's not super focused on, and often happens during the time skips, but it also reflects the MCs desire to not talk about things. Something often skipped over in most stories, much less fan fics. I soldly thing Archer, the author, could write a stand alone novel and it be well recieved.

 

Style: organic, and skips over things that would drag on the story. I've always rather likes training to be a montoge instead of most of the stoy with a fight at the end.

Grammar: Sometimes there's mispellings, or a he instead of her, or missing knows. Not enough to hurt my brain, but it is what it is.

Story: I'm diggin the differences. They show how the author really put thought into how things would change beacuse of the MC. And good god is it refreshing that the author allows the Mc to change what she would logically and emotionally change what she wants/needs to, while keeping some things under wraps. It's also nice that the things changed are shown when the MC learns of them, and not shown when she doesn't know. Keeping a consistant PoV, and only showing minor scenes of other characters. Like what most of early, non-filler Naruto was like.

character: Solid Mc, I'm interested in knowing about with a colorful personality. The changes she cause in other characters are also consistant, and interesting.

OnanMaster
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Decent fan fic.

starts a bit slow but picks up speed mid way trhough. 

entertaining and recomended for anyone in to emotional Drama.

Danare
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I've read lot of Naruto fanfics recently and this one so far takes the cake. The character development is amazing and I can feel emotion from the text. I love how things are done. I feel it was extremely well-done and the pace isn't too rapid! 

I can't wait for more chapters and look forward to her progression (Naruto's too!) in her path of ninja. :)