Laria - A LitRPG

by Eyeeric

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy GameLit High Fantasy LitRPG Magic Male Lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai School Life Slice of Life Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

Welcome to Laria, where Transports from different planets find themselves living under RPG-like mechanics, with no memories of their past lives. 

Follow our MC, Vince, as he navigates this new world in a school life/slice of life adventure as he tries to negotitate with different races and gods to figure out how to return home. 

This will be a crunchy LitRPG with stats, classes, hitpoints, etc. 

It will be a strong-lead. If you don't like OP characters, this book is not for you. He WILL struggle, but he will be OP given his level. 

Cover credit - https://www.fiverr.com/onesketchman

Book editing credit (through chapter 11) - https://www.fiverr.com/beyondfrontier

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sandro530
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It is ok it is readable and written nicely, but that's it, it isn't that exciting or fun and while it has some nice elements with the gods and the rpg-style it isn't good enough for me to continue reading this.

The Grammar is good I haven't found any mistakes, the style ok it isn't anything grand and more on the safer side, because it gives enough info to not be exhausting or an infodump. But it isn't anything special, the characters are nice as well, while not very detailed or fleshed out other than the MC they are good.

I won't continue reading this, as it is a not that exciting and while it has slice of life it I don't find it very good as it neither has comedy or tragedy to give the story the sprinkle of story elements to make it an enjoyable read. Bluntly said it is a bit boring.

 

Imochuk
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A hidden gem in the making

If the author continues with this great work, I know it would be well liked

Kap
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Fun little ride

Reviewed at: Chapter 12

So it's VERY early days right now but i m liking what I'm seeing. No big exposition dumps, a couple references, and no Harem. Can't wait to see how it evolves from here!

Primate
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The style is first person central narration. very delicate to write but the author is able to pull it off successfully without damaging the concept of the story. Readers won't get lost in the mind of the MC which can really affect the meaning of the book.

The storyline is a typical isekai (transported into another world) RPG. The author is doing a great job in this aspect.

The grammar quality is top notch. No noticeable errors.

The characters are good. There's no way one can judge the characters of first person narration without judging the mind of the author directly. The author is letting the readers into his mind and see how he views his world and thinks. The author did a good job here too.

Well done author.   

Greyko
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The story might be good later on, but in the very first chapter MC gets a unique skill because he is MC, no questions asked. Then he gets obliterated and saved by plot armor without any consequences for no other reason than the author's so-called "hardships". After that, he gets unreasonable skills absolutely without any effort and in no time, again, because he's MC. No, he's not awesome or intelligent or competent or really hard working. He's just average Joe MC who gets pulled through by plot for the sake of plot.

I wouldn't complain about things mentioned above if author had actually put some effort to make these events appear somewhat realistic or interesting, but it was half-assed from my point of view.

Gattala
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new way of an isekai start and a refreshing idea of another world

Reviewed at: Chapter 12

at the time of this review i got to ch 13 so with my inadequate knowledge about this novel i found that there is a plot to the story.. i think, but the writing is easy to understand and i find the grammar really good, still, there is a need to more character building and world building, you cant have that much slice of life if you dont know what the MC is living for and what is the world looks like.. well, enough rambling from me, i will wait for more ch and will change my review along the way

TRNRLoganpoke
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Pretty meh characterization

Reviewed at: Chapter 10

 Grammar is perfectly fine. There aren't any major mistakes

 

Style is also fine since it doesn't shift from one style to another.

 

Story is fine and clearly set up. 

 

The problem is the characters. The MC sorta just takes everything without really getting angry. It reads like he has no actual interest in returning to his wife but knows that looks bad so pretends to. The worst part is he has ABSOLUTELY no anger towards the jerks who immediately use him.