I Became Rat!

by Sad Clown

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead Female Lead LitRPG Magic Martial Arts Mythos Non-Human lead Reincarnation
Warning This fiction contains:
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Due some unexpected event a girl who lived her life for one purpose reincarnates as rat in another world full of wonders and horrors. Losing her only purpose how she will live in new world. Will she quitely live and die as she wish or find a new goal.


From the writer : I'm an amateur writer so please overlook plot holes, grammar issues, or anything else a story is supposed to have. This is my original story so ...as saying goes "if you have nothing nice to say, don't say anything at all"

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hsteinvall
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 I feel kind of bad writing this, and if the author really wants this gone I can remove it, but since it was in trending withouth a single review, I think it is only fair to put out a warning. The grammar is horrible and entire words are missing in every other scentence. Trying to make sense of what is happening is a challenge. I can't review anyting else in the story, because the writing is so bad that it becomes unreadable.

Phipsi
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There is no redemption else then to go back and edit the chapters. The grammar is as bad as said. Words are missing,

HOWever I don't think it's difficult to understand what is said. I was able to binge read it without problems. The story and characters are fantastic. 

Once you get a feel for the writing style it's easy to read and really fun. 

I can only recomend this story. The chapters are short and fresh. 

Don't get demotivated author just maybe when you reach a writing block howabout going back and editing the old chapters till you get new inspirations for the future. 

Looking forward to the continuation of this novel. 

also characters are so funny XD