Among Giants (A Cultivation Novel)

by Nameless32

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Drama Fantasy Female Lead High Fantasy Magic Male Lead Martial Arts Multiple Lead Characters Strong Lead Wuxia Xianxia

In short: Twins try to progress in a world where you can become infinitely strong. Their mentor is tired of cultivation society and just wants people to be nice.

When a mystic has reached the peak of their world’s growth, they are able to ascend, leaving it behind in favor of a higher, more potent plane. Since the dawn of existence, ambitious prodigies have pushed the boundary of what seems possible, ascending beyond countless worlds in search for the peak.

Kiro… is not one of those geniuses. However, his twin sister just might be. Secluded on a border world and selected for their talent in fire mana, the siblings are unknowing participants of a centuries-long experiment, hosted by a powerful eccentric on the verge of immortality. Follow the twins as they learn of and attempt to escape their predicament, before venturing out into the wider world(s).

Disclaimer: I use a combination of British and American English, though I tend to lean more towards British. (See what I did there?)

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[NOTE] Rewrite in progress! In order to simplify my life, I'm going to use decimals for all the added chapters until the rewrite is complete. Sorry if this causes some confusion!

Releases every Sunday, Wednesday, and Friday.

Please feel free to comment any feedback or suggestions, as well as any errors I may have made. Happy reading! :)

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Chapter Name Release Date
0 - The Trial ago
1 - I Am Not My Mother ago
2 - Seira ago
2.5 - I Really Don't Want To Kill Anybody Today ago
3 - A Saint ago
4 - Rynn ago
5 - The Starlight's Drop ago
6 - Weak ago
7 - Rynn and Seira ago
8 - The Blessings Of Youth ago
9 - Unraveling ago
10 - A Missing Boy ago
11 - Ascension ago
12 - The Limit ago
13 - Day Zero ago
14 - A Saint's Training ago
15 - At Least It Isn't A Dragon? ago
16 - Climbing ago
17 - The Matriarch ago
18 - A Final Strike ago
19 - A Last Stand ago
20 - To Fight Between Realms ago
21 - The End To A Long Day ago
22- A Lesson In Cultivation ago
23 - Understanding Your Aspect ago
24 - The Basics Are Not Basic ago
25 - Breaking Through To The Tenth Purification! Heavens Tremble At The Flawless Hong Tian Rynn!!! ago
26 - Birthday Wishes ago
27 - The Saint of Boundless Wind ago
28 - Birthday Presents ago
29 - Supervisor Ba ago
30 - Tag-Teaming ago
31 - Masked Mayhem ago
33 - Family ago
34 - A Duet ago
35 - True Lightning ago
36 - The Volcanic Saint ago
37 - Stronger ago
38 - Shut Up, Rynn ago
39 - Imperfect ago
40 - A Complete Foundation ago
Final Update! Regular Posts Returning Soon! ago

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The Style.

Omniscient third person narration. 

How is the author using it? Brilliantly. He's able to project the emotions, feelings and perspectives of the various characters into the readers in a brilliant way.

The Story.

This is a xuanhuan story that follows the sojourn of two siblings (twins), Kiro and Seira, as they attempt to escape an experiment, and after then, to explore the worlds. 

Right from the synopsis, which could be better, the author is able to draw the attention of the readers, and once they start reading, very difficult to stop. The story is keeping to the plotline, so far. And the worldbuilding is greatly done,

The grammar.

High quality. Although there are few minor errors, nothing major that could affect the story's flow.

The character.

The characters are well made. The author is able to arouse different feelings in the readers concerning each character. This shows how well defined the characters are. Perfectly fitted to their roles.

Great work author. Keep up the good work.

 

Sarius
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Hello, 

Just as a heads up, this review isn't to bash the Author by any means. It is intended to give insight into how I felt about the story and how I personally believe that is could be improved in future. The issues I have with the story can definitely be fixed.

Also remember: this review may mean nothing to you, take it with a grain of salt. Also read when it was posted (24/06/2020) to see if you should even take what I am saying seriously, especially if there are 50 more chapters out that might solve issues talked about here.

Style:

First of all, the style. It is decidedly average, and palatable by all means, but I found the writing somewhat detached from the story itself. It felt like things that were meant to have emotional impact just weren't portrayed correctly for me to create an emotional bond with the situation. 

This could be from a lack of descriptors, or just a lack of sufficient time for the emotional impact to be built up and then released, I'm honestly not quite sure.

Story:

The idea is there, and there are definitely interesting ideas to be pulled on, especially with the sect and what that is all about. However, I feel like it continually falls flat with not giving enough time for things to develop and continuing on anyways. This happens continually throughout the story and I feel like each thing that is happening needs far more build up time and intrigue for it to be really impactful as a plot point. As of writing this review, thing simply seem to be just happening to the main characters.

Grammar:

It’s grammar. It isn’t world class edited but has minimal mistakes.

Characters:

Potentially the biggest downfall of the story is the total lack of character growth and depth. This will be written in spoilers for obvious reasons.

Spoiler: Spoiler

Conclusion:

This review may be seen as overly harsh, but I feel like the Author has a lot more potential than what they are currently displaying. The characters need desperately to be worked on more. More time needs to be given to each plot point so that the story doesn’t just feel like a flurry of things happening so the story can keep moving forward, heedless of the character development being left on the table.

I hope that this story lives up to it's potential in future.

MrBadWithNames
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Among the giants is a fun cultivation story with likable main cast.

 

Style - 4.5/5,

The style is good, though the occasional "**************" serving as a break isn't pretty to look at. That aside it's everything you expect.

The story moves forward at a great pace, you never get stuck in one place for too long.

There are plenty of descriptions and very vivid fight scenes, my only other complaint is the short chapter length, though it's not a big issue.

 

Gramma - 5/5,

While I saw some comments adressing a few slipups, personally I didn't notice a single mistake.

Everything is written every nicely.

 

Story - 5/5,

Like previously stated the story moves pretty quickly, it follows a cast ranging from under dogs to big important people of high rank.

 

Character - 5/5,

The characters are great, without going into spoiler territory, I have to say my favourite character is a certain saint ;)

The characters feel real and relatable.

 

Overall, while I'm not really a big fan of cultivation stories I became really invested with this on, 

It took me maybe ten chapters to click the follow button and I reccomend you consider doing the same because this story deserves more attention for sure.

 

Lokan Marsland
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I really enjoy this story, however with it being so new I can't speak too definitively yet. This isn't exactly a new idea but the author made me care about the characters and that is more than I can say for most xianxias I read. Good job.

YAK Edge
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A Xinxia that feels different

Reviewed at: 10 - A Missing Boy

Among giants is cultivation about a young who was born without mana and thus disgraced by the unfair society he lives in. That sounds rather 08/15, so why do I say that it feels different?

Story 4/5

One major reason is simply the general atmosphere of the story. It is just so positive. Even though our MC Kiro has to face an oppressive system, one never gets the feeling that things are hopeless. There's always a light at the end of the tunnel. and not just in a silver lining kind of sense. Especially during times in times like these, it is always good to be reminded of that.

But besides that, the story is interesting. What at first seems like your typical Xinxia setting slowly turns out to be something more mysterious and strange. We have an isolated island in a vast sea that covers the entire, apparently empty world, citizens that seem to live much longer, and two clans who seem to be working towards an unknown goal and are willing to cross any borders. And of course, there is the question just what happened after the birth of main character Kiro.

Character: 3,5/5

While Kiro is a sympathetic fellow and following him just fine, he gets overshadowed by his sister. I'm not just talking about power. Seira steals the show. She's just a bundle of energy, that brings positivity into every scene she is in. Even though Kiro is the MC, Seira so far feels like the real star of the show. While that is good for her as a character, it also means that Kiro so far can't carry the novel. Usually, that is fine, but he's supposed to be her narrative equal. And while he starts to grow a spine and take the initiative, for the majority of the first part he was extremely passive and it felt like he was actively ignoring the plot. As for the other characters, Aer is interesting and rather different from the usual mysterious mentor archetype, so that brings a breath of fresh air. All the other characters so far seem only to exist, though given the direction the story is heading, they were never intended to be more than statists. 

I also liked Mentor Ming, but then he disappeared.

Grammar: 4/5

There were a few mistakes here and there, but nothing that should reduce your enjoyment much.

Style: 3,5/5

The story was easy too read and had a quick, nice flow. But what I think is Among Giant's biggest issue is that there is so far little telling instead of showing. While that is a standard for light novel-esque stories, it brought me out of the immersion too often. Instead of being told that something had happened, I would rather see what happened. A trick for that is to imagine a scene like a movie. Describe what one sees in any particular scene. Write that, then rewrite it to make it atmospheric and one more time to create a better flow.

Another problems were the use of anachronistic words. The setting seems to be ancient China-esque. As such, some modern words just don't fit. 

 Final verdict:

Reading the story was really relaxing. Sometimes, after a long day, you just need that. Fans of Xinxia/Cultivation stories will definitely enjoy this. It plays with the usual story elements and thus keeps the genre fresh.

Morgan Cole
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This has a nice positive vibe to it

Reviewed at: 20 - To Fight Between Realms

Like most Xianxia, there are your typical super-selfish evil characters in this fiction, but the two main characters and their mentor are bright lights of positivity. 

The world opens up fairly late, and you see that the parochial society "Paradise" that the MCs start in is just a tiny corner of the universe. It would be nice to see that earlier.

There are some slips in tone, where the characters says things anachronistic or just strange for Xianxia, but they are minor.

The action is a bit confused at times but is mostly good.

This is a good, interesting read and with some edits I feel it will be pretty great.

DragonOfRochester
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A Refreshing Take on the Cultivation Genre

Reviewed at: 17 - The Matriarch

This story is pretty interesting so far and worth following!

While it is a slow build, that is often typical of the genre. So, don't expect fight scenes and assassinations right away. But that's not necessarily a bad thing since we learn about the universe and it's troubles fairly early. We also get a better understanding of the characters as most of the time is spent on them and their problems, and what is a story if not it's characters?

Its still early on in the story and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes and finding out more about the techniques of this universe.

HashBrown
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This is my first read of a xianxia fiction and I'm glad it's this story. The worldbuilding isn't heavy to follow and the story keeps on getting interesting as you progress.

Style: 5/5

I gave it 5 star because even though I prefer 1st person perspective, the 3rd person style of this story is well-executed and written. I also like the pacing and how long each chapter is (some say that it's on the short side but for me, it's just on the right side)

Grammar: 5/5

Nothing too much to note. There were a few errors but because some readers actively mention it in the comment section, the author can fix those immediately, making me read it in an already fixed state so yeah...5 stars

Story: 5/5

The story is interesting. At first, I'm just interested in Kiro's improvement but as I continue reading, I also got intrigued on Seira's growth too. The story folllows the adventures of the two so I gave it a 5 star.

Character: 5/5

I like the twins character and I also like how the story didn't introduced too much characters in the early chapters. That's my problem to some stories I've read here in RR and reading this fiction like this made me give it a 5 star.

Over-all, it's 5 stars too me until chapter 10. Looking forward on how will this story unfold.

soundsofhysteria
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A CLASSIC THAT WILL KEEP READERS HOOKED

Reviewed at: 9 - Unraveling

This author takes a fan favorite of this site, Xianxia, and makes it unique. As many have said, the author takes a spin on this classic tale that makes it feel fresh, unique, and entertaining. Each chapter entails an adventure or character development that makes you want to turn the next page and learn more about this story.

I think the author's strongest trait is the way they are able to characterize their protagonist and side characters. I want to know more about them, about their ins and outs and what makes them tick. That is such a hard thing to tackle, and as a writer, I respect them for that immensely.

Overall, if you enjoy a classic Xianxia story, but appreciate the creative touches that make it fresh, you will want to pick this story up. 

VMJaskiernia
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Fantastic worldbuilding and characters.

I love that there's the inclusion of Chinese alchemy into this world. The concept of Saints is a nice bridge that expands on the bureaucracy often in eastern mythology, and makes it easier to understand from a Western point of view.

The characters are amazing, the situations they are in are great. I can't wait to see what happens to the twins as I read on, and even the chapters without much action are interesting and keep you entertained. Definitely Following.