Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Historical Dungeon GameLit Harem High Fantasy Male Lead Mythos Ruling Class Strategy Strong Lead Supernatural War and Military
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The Drums Of War Have Sounded.

In A World Where The Strong Devour The Weak.

Lives Will Reaped By The Hooded Reaper Dancing In A Bountiful Harvest.

Blood Will Bathe The Lands.

Empires Will Fall.

Those Once In Slumber Will Awaken.

But, Lose Not All Hope Inhabitants Of The Realm.

 From Five Peaks, Will A Pheonix Arise.

So Weep O Ye People, Weep, For Your Salvation Comes.

 Let Thou Tears Form Rivers.

For Your Tear Drops On Earth Summon the King Of Kings.

Bow I Say

Bow.

For Your Sovereign, Has Arrived.

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FrostPrism
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The story is good and I enjoy the characteristics of the MC. But, the story just moves so fast.

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 Overall, the story is fine with very few if any, granted I wasn't looking for them, grammar mistakes and I enjoy the premise of it. But the story just moves to fast for me to find it fun to read and the MC seems to just start off a little too powerful for my tastes. Other than that I would recommend others to read for a fast paced action/building novel.

1and1
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An interesting read

Reviewed at: The Trifecta

From what I can tell so far, the author seems be be incorporating history and mythology/religions together. Though he doesn't stick to any chronological order, he makes it apparent who his characters are based off and speaking of those, characters he does a great a job of fleshing them, avoiding the typical one dimensional characters most authors seem to make most sidesside characters be. I'm honestly kind of curious where he will take the story, especially since he seems to be adding in all the pantheon's. Which honestly could use some love. I will admit that it starts out incredibly fast paced but it does slow down to a moderate but smooth pace. 

Honestly if you are into myths, op mc's, kingdom building, and unique world's, its worth giving a shot.

Well that's my 2cents.