Building a World From the Ground Up

by Potato Starch

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

A planet named Ereos learning how to exist. She's a child, go easy on her. Lets hope the god of war doesn't find her first.

(A full restart of the story. Sorry if you wanted her to be Akana, my draft said the edgiest name ever and I made it Ereos, and DAMN is that a good name or what?)

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