Of Frost and Steel

by TheYoungMariner

Original ONGOING Adventure Fantasy Female Lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Reincarnation Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Profanity

After being kicked out of home by her own parents, Emily found herself living in the house of an old woman while working as a plumber to help pay the bills. 

Her slightly unusual but still very normal life came to an abrupt end one day when an incoming car crashed into hers. 

When she next opened her eyes, she found no ambulance or hospital room waiting for her. What she found were instead the faces of beings much larger than her who were not entirely human, and the opportunity to live a new life, free of her old one.  

 

WARNING:

This fiction is dedicated to a friend of mine who spent twelve years of her life hiding who she was because she feared the reaction of her family. For this reason it contains LGBT themes, although they won't be the sole or main focus of the story. It may also contain sexual scenes in its later chapters, but they will probably be kept to a minimum or be "fade to black".

Chapters will be around 1000 words long and without a fixed release schedule, for the moment.

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kwd1233
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Hoping this story runs for a long time

Reviewed at: Chapter 5

I'm enjoying the story so far, and I cant wait to see where it goes. I know the mc is in a fantasy world, and I'm wondering what kind of world it is. How her tribe interacts with other people. If there are other people in this world. How advanced the others are in comparison to their tribe. Also if anyone in the group will figure out that she is reincarnated.

strangewaraxe
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 This is right here is a great story, one of the best I've read overall. The setting is pretty simple to understand, I didn't have to do any research on what she was or have to figure out how her powers worked like in the Chinese spiritual magic with meditation and the works. I like the idea, how many word per chapter there are, and the rate at which the chapters are churned out. (though that will most likely change) I'm excited to see the next chapter which I feel will conclude the introductory arc and see what happens next!

OfOldGodsandNewMen
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Not saying tone down the LGBT

Reviewed at: Chapter 2

But it's not necessary to beat us over the head with it. I understand and wholeheartedly respect the message you're trying to convey, but it feels a little shoved. The story is great so far, and the writing is excellent, but the LGBT element could be weaved a little better so as not be so blinded by it that it overshadows everything else. Keep up the great work!