Bloodlain

Bloodlain

by Mends

Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Traumatising content

Rain Azaro D'Rudolf is his name. An illegitimate son of the Lord of the vampires. Born as a half-human, he has been treated as an outcast by his own people and abused by his own family. But after the war, he was taken in by the bloodlord of the kingdom of Finah, the human kingdom, and was introduced to things he never new... Love and care... This is where his story begins.. The journey of an outcast, of how, and the things he had to do to become the most powerful being.

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Grayshade
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No world building, crazy decisions, everything is just black & white.

Reviewed at: Chapter 7

The story makes no sense. Literally everyone hates him, it's unreal. The world is never absolute. It's not black and white.

And there's so many actions with zero consequences or just stuff happening for the sake of it happening. 

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I love this stories mechanics and I love how the mc dislike humans. I find that it gives a good discrimination on a good world building. Thank you for this form of entertainment. I also think that it deserve a perfect score cuz why not everything perfect in its own way