The embodiment of pain, sadness, and hatred

The embodiment of pain, sadness, and hatred

by voidoccupant

Allan jons only felt pain and sadness his entire life. His parents left him when he was 5
forcing him to live with his sister. She abuses him because her job sucks. After
entering high school he makes a few friends and has a crush. But after an event he
kills himself with hatred added to the mix only to find himself in front of gods and they offer him a job to destroy every human.
  • Overall Score
  • Style Score
  • Story Score
  • Grammar Score
  • Character Score
  • Total Views :
  • 38,624
  • Average Views :
  • 2,971
  • Followers :
  • 120
  • Favorites :
  • 39
  • Ratings :
  • 9
  • Pages :
  • 70
Advertisement
Remove
Go to Table of Contents
Fiction breaking rules? Report
Advertisement
Remove
Author
voidoccupant

voidoccupant

Achievements
First Comment!
Word Count (6)
200 Followers
Fledgling Reviewer (I)
3 Review Upvotes
Top List #2000
50,000 Views
7th Anniversary
Advertisement
Remove

Leave a review

Reviews
Sort by:
louis24380
Overall

Interesting work, i will keep reading :) i hope you will keep the mc personality dark