Silver Dragon

by dox991

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Mystery Female Lead High Fantasy Magic Male Lead Martial Arts Non-Human lead Reader interactive Reincarnation Strong Lead Supernatural War and Military Wuxia
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Li Fen is a martial arts fanatic who much to the displeasure of her parents achieved her dreams in finally being able to compete in the top martial arts tournament within the country.  

Though, Li Fen didn’t expect that upon buying a random cursed dragon pendant in an antique store that she would be thrust into a world of cultivation, one in which mages and warriors who cultivate a mystical energy rule the world with an iron fist! 

With a mysterious old dragon as a teacher, Li Fen must grow her Silver Dragon bloodline to the peak allowing her to bring the once extinct Silver Dragons back to the continent.

 

Dragon picture: https://www.deviantart.com/dantiger/art/Silver-dragon-head-25754995

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Avadonia
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Not my kind of novel i'm just making a review because I feel the other reviewer note of 1 in grammar is straight up wrong, sure there might be a few grammar mistake per chapter but it's not worth a 1 star and i'm sure people will dismiss the story because of that

 

The story (up to chapter 2) seem fine for now altough if you understood by the summary that the MC is a dragon or have a real dragon teacher note that she seem human and have a dragon in a pendant as teacher

 

I realise it's not the best review considering i'm only up to chapter 2 but I wanted to balance the advanced review star

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A reincarnation story to a cultivation world with an OP twist for the MC in the form of the dragon advisor and bloodline.  I personally like a reasonably slow burn and it is far closer to slice-of-life than it is to War-and-Military so far.  The MC’s character and the supporting characters are slowly emerging.

The good: I see the start to an interesting story and improvements in the author’s style.

The bad:  Fairly heavy info dumps in places, certain degree of reliance on genre tropes.

The ugly:  Grammar.  I am betting English is not the author’s first language.

That being said, this could be the start of a great ride.

GLM
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Not for me, but do keep writting, pratice makes perfect.

Reviewed at: Chapter 1 - Rebirth

 I wont ramble on with this as I've read two chappies. To me this seems like a good try at writting, but I quickly realised I can't stand the grammar and sentence structure.

Its not wrong as much as its just amateurish, its tottaly readable, just not particularly pleasant for me.

Honestly I can't say much because I haven't read enough of it, the Wuxia element seems like the barebones required for the tag to work, and it doesn't do anything that I haven't seem before.

This is not mean't to shit on the Author, writting is no easy feat, and my own first try at writting is an abomination of such magnitude I have to lock it up in the 99999^10th layer of Story Hell to make sure it doesn't ever come to light, and I'm a proud owner of a story in Hiatus because life decided that No, I sure as hell do not have time to write, now get your lazy ass back to studying me.

As a non-native speaker, you need pratice to get gud, so keep writting, read some other novels in good english and you'll eventually have it down. Good luck.