The Strange Life of an Elf From Sydney

by Izetta_Fanfic

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

A fanfiction of Wutosama's Metaworld Chronicles following a (mostly) original cast of characters.

 

Set at the end of 2002, The Strange Life of an Elf From Sydney follows the story of Luna and co. as they navigate their way through their teenage years and find their place in the world. But in this world, death isn't uncommon and it takes tenacity to thrive. Will the girl's survive into their adulthood or die trying to get there?

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Great show! Looking forward to more!

Reviewed at: Chapter 11 - The Wayward Sister

Looking forward to more adventures of Iris and Luna... and also Lilith. 
I would like to see Lilith :D 


Sally forth! O Fan-fic! 

Thou wast not born for death, immortal Fiction!
         No hungry 0.5s tread thee down;
The CH I hear this passing night was sweet diction 
         In RR days by emperor penguin and Kana clown
Away! away! for I will read to thee,
         Not charioted by Nyan and her herd of meowths,
But on the quill-tipped wings of Poesy
RoyalCoin
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Reading this, you'll notice that there has been some considerable effort to make the story engaging right from the start. I am at chapter 11, the latest chapter as of yet, and it has only gotten better the further along I got. The characters feel alive, and I get the feeling that all of them will have a purpose later on.

There's no lack, nor is the writing overly detailed. The writing flows smoothly without info dumps or any repetitions that I have seen, impressively done.

I am no a native English speaker myself, but I have a reasonable understanding. What I can say about the grammar is that it's good, It may not be topnotch, as I have seen some faults here and there. But I have seen nothing that has detracted me from the reading experience, and I know the author is working hard at improving her skills.

All in all, Izetta looks to be highly motivated to write, have the skill and is working on improving it. I have given this a five-star rating, and I have had it in my favourites for a while now. So do keep your eyes on it, I certainly will, as the ride will only get better and probably wilder from here on out.

If you haven't read Metaworld Chronicles, please read it. As Izetta told in the description, this is a fanfiction of that work of art. You will find both Izetta and Wutosama on the Metaworld Chronicles discord.

Drazcmd
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Excellent so far, does a great job of drawing you in and making you curious / hungry for more!

mano77
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awesome fanfic of metaworld

Reviewed at: The Dream

great start, interesting chars and plot already.  carefully written, charming, intriguing tensions.. fast pace!  the background of metaworld, but entirely different chars and race- quarter-elves!  i eagerly await each ch :)