Mists of Redemption

by MichelleRReid

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore

In the twenty years since the Gates opened and began releasing hordes of monsters onto Earth, half the human population had been killed, governments collapsed, and a new breed of enhanced humans evolved to protect us — Hunters. 

The day after I graduated from high school, I tested positive as a Hunter. The weakest Hunter in human history. In a society where the strong rule and the weak become prey, it was a death sentence. I knew that, but I wasn’t going to just roll over and die.

Pitted daily against monsters I couldn’t kill and ostracized by other Hunters, my miserable existence changed when I heard five words. ‘I will make you stronger.’ A ‘System’ attached to my soul, one that allowed me to level up and become stronger. But the ‘System’ wanted something from me. 

All I wanted was to live and enable my family to eat. The price was to become a tool for someone else’s revenge.

Note from the author: Chapters are going to be released every Monday and Friday morning. Keep a look out! 

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Hakan
Overall

I like it but a lot is taken from solo leveling, I understand people defending this one because it's much better done. Some of the most glaring faults of solo leveling isn't present. Stil, credit where credit is due.

 

The story has enough of its own flare to make me look forward to next chapter! 

a_man_in_black
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this is plagiarism and the author should be ashamed.

Reviewed at: Chapter 14

it's a copy of the manga solo leveling. the writing is actually decent, so i could respect it as fanfiction, but this is just a rewrite with a girl for the main character instead of a guy. even the name is the same. the MC of solo leveling is called Jin, and this one's MC is named Jyn.

it's so low effort it deserves to be shamed.

tastytots
Overall

It's fine to be inspired by solo leveling

Reviewed at: Chapter 21

Basically all KR webnovels copy the hell out of each other, literally every single one for a good 5 years made the MC a necromancer (I think this trend was started by LMS)

So it's fine. Stay positive author, you aren't doing anything out of the ordinary wrong compared to Seoul Station Necromancer or Solo Leveling itself copying the whole necromancer spiel 

DrAlt
Overall

solo levelling reimaged badly with female lead

Reviewed at: Chapter 4

 The MC doesn't know how to skin something after a year of walking around with her comprehensive knowledge pearl.  They have computers, but she never watched a training video?

Also super-weak so basic short sword?  Not a ranged weapon or spear or learn a support role?  No poison darts?  No 'take-a-loan' for a good skill?

Only made it a few chapters in, and the plot had too many holes for me to enjoy the story.

jacobpaige
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Decent original story

Reviewed at: Chapter 15

I honestly don't know why people are saying this is so similar to I Alone Level Up (aka: Solo-Leveling). At best, they share a handful of similar plot points. Its got about as much in common with that series as Coiling Dragon does with I Shall Seal the Heavens, or Star Wars and any other series based on The Hero's Journey.

That aside, its a decent series, good grammar and characterization. I'd recommend trying it if it sounds interesting. It's not really hooked me yet, but I felt that someone needed to tell potential new readers that this really isn't a copy of someone else's story.

Tacojack
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I'm not gonna put much in this, just that I like it. I like the MC, I like some parts of the world, and the system she uses seems pretty nifty. I am now adding a sentence to meet the fifty word minimum. I am now adding another sentence to meet the fifty word mininum. Keep up the good work!