Slave Company

Slave Company

by Sudar

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Avian a cruel business is transported with his old highschool class into a different world into a younger body back when he was 15, everything was strange yet fine, but Avian quickly figures out that his former classmates weren't the same mentally as they were back on earth, an alliance threatened by the demons who need to be erdicated by the heroes.

Avian wants nothing to do with it.

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Chapter Name Release Date
Slave Company Chapter 1 Transportation ago
Slave Company Chapter 2 Awareness ago
Slave Company Chapter 3 The Day Draws Near ago
Slave Company Chapter 4 Blessings Revealed ago
Slave Company Chapter 5 Monster Tamer ago
Slave Company Chapter 6 Debacle ago
Slave Company Chapter 7 A Brief Rest ago
Slave Company Chapter 8 Time Of The Hour ago
Slave Company Chapter 9 A Game Of Assumptions ago
Slave Company Chapter 10 On The Way ago
Slave Company Chapter 11 New Self ago
Slave Compay Chapter 12 Battle ago
Slave Company Chapter 13 Stalemate ago
Slave Company Chapter 14 Clash ago
Slave Company Chapter 15 Murder Calls ago
Slave Company Chapter 16 Encircled ago
Slave Company Chapter 17 Mourning Sign ago
Slave Company Chapter 18 Fiery Finale ago
Slave Company Chapter 19 Debts And Wishes ago
Slave Company Chapter 20 Principles ago
Slave Company Chapter 21 Submission ago
Slave Company Chapter 22 Burial ago
Slave Company Chapter 23 [6] Days ago
Slave Company Chapter 24 Fire Of The Close Past ago
Slave Company Chapter 25 The Metal Frontier ago
Slave Company Chapter 26 A Danger Approaching And A Store Revelation ago
Slave Company Chapter 27 Slave Auction ago
Slave Company Chapter 28 Birds Of A Feather ago
Slave Company Chapter 29 Blind Rabbit ago
Slave Company Chapter 30 The Half-Orc And The Female Knight ago
Slave Company Chapter 31 Last Slave ago
Slave Company Chapter 32 Split ago
Slave Company Chapter 33 Breaking Ice ago
Slave Company Chapter 34 Tame Earth ago
Slave Company Chapter 35 Road Discussion ago
Slave Company Chapter 36 Shopping ago
Slave Company Chapter 37 Heavy Stench ago
Slave Company Chapter 38 Conflict ago
Slave Company Chapter 39 Awaking ago
Slave Company Chapter 40 Established Dynamic ago
Slave Company Chapter 41 Name For The Sad Rabbit ago
Slave Company Chapter 42 Emotional Confusion ago
Slave Company Chapter 43 Shaman Preview ago
Slave Company Chapter 44 Spirit Contract ago
Slave Company Chapter 45 KNightly Duties ago
Slave Company Chapter 46 Meditation ago
Slave Company Chapter 47 First Encounter ago
Slave Company Chapter 48 War Cry ago
Slave Company Chapter 49 Reveal ago
Slave Company Chapter 50 Dire Encounter ago
Slave Company Chapter 51 Bloody Dust ago

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lalasu
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I know that's not a mandatory rule you have to stick to every time. But what the author is doing is essentially writing some descriptions and summarizing what happened. He says 'MC is clever', MC can perfectly socialize despite his character', 'MC has fooled everyone with his perfect acting', etc. But this is just the author stating it in plain text. No dialogues, no actual scenes, no interacting with classmates besides the author saying 'he interacted with them for a whole year'. It feels like reading a system log.

It might be that the author did it to get through the summoning chapters faster, but do you really need to turn your first chapters (that will influence your reader's opinion the most) into the bland porridge of words?

The story might get better after that; I'll never know.

The other problem is that MC's character is boring. He doesn't like socializing, he needs no friends, and he needs no romance. The author's style of writing makes it worse because MC doesn't even talk. The author is doing it for him.

MC feels like an autistic kid that can do just one thing right, in exchange he will do it better than anyone else.

I wish we could have some tag like 'dead inside' because 'anti-hero' and 'villainous lead' tags are full of novels with main characters like that and it's almost impossible to make them interesting. You need to be really skilled to pull it off.

The story itself is generic, tropes we all know like class summoning, brainwashing, discarded 'looser', blood magic, probable slavery, and so on. The only novelty is that MC doesn't care about what is happening.

 
 
 
angryfan
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Author is trying to boost his word count by writing useless scenes

Reviewed at: Slave Company Chapter 28 Birds Of A Feather

I have read up to chapter 83 and from chapter 30 to 83 only around a week has passed. Yes that is right the author used 50 chapters to describe a week in this novel. This is not a slice of life novel. He really decided to pull out all the stops to get his word count up. He wrote a chapter about buying regular clothes, taking a bath, useless talking where the nothing really happens.

 

This novel is full of chapters that really should be paragraphs. The author seems to put the word count above all else even the story. Most of the character building chapters feel like filler chapters, because the characters really do not follow logical or emotional thinking. Chapters where the characters show feelings are not well written and do not make sense in a way that a real person might act.

If the author was not so worried about putting out as many chapters as possible and actually made each chapter relevant to the story it would be a okay novel. If the author then built on that and thought more about the charaters as real people instead of stereotypical anime characters it would be a good novel.

fanobody
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I like the style.

Grammar is a problem, it is like the author didn't re read his story because there are sentense that lack word or is porly constructed. I am not a grammar nazi but when you can't concentrate on the story because of it many times the score go down.

Story: it is a power fantasy of summon heros and defeat the demon king withour mc being the different hero of the bunch. I have a problem with it when the mc say he would like to be part of the slave market and hit a kid(ok she is older than the mc but act as a kid) after her butler say to take care of her. The author should put a Traumatising content tag.

Character: Are all over the place. A girl describled as rich noble brat that go where she should not and treat the other as servan is revelated to be a exiled noble that is abused. Mc was a ceo and he learned ancien greek for business... He learned a death language for a buisness... when he said himself that he is surprised to learn a language in a month with hero cheat... 

Apart from that i liked some character like the rival captain.