Rebirth Of The Commando

by Waffie

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Comedy Drama Fantasy Historical Psychological Romance Harem Martial Arts School Life Slice of Life Sports Supernatural
Rebirth of The Demon's Synopsis ( Updated Synopsis 26/11/2015 )

****IN THE MIDDLE OF A RE-WRITE****

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“To think that I, Li Feng, a member of the Jade Dragon Group would die by committing suicide.. This is ludicrous..” Those were the last words of Li Feng as he drowned in a sea of blazing flames but little did he know that what comes after wasn't the afterlife but a gifted second chance. Awaking back on Earth, in a body that does not belong to him was what he hadn't expected.


What would Li Feng do? Live another life that was just as bleak as the previous? Slaved to an office job from nine to five?


Memories of the past! Memories of the present! Fusionnnn-Ha! With memories of both lives intact, join Li Feng as he treads down this treacherous journey known as the future!


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Chapters submitted so far : Eighteen [ 18 ]

Proof-Readed Chapters : Ten [ 10 ] ( Not 100% error free as I'm not a machine unfortunately )

Total Words : 73603 ( Author's Notes and ETC not included )

Updated As Of :

-26/11/2015 – Uploaded Chapter 14
-28/11/2015 - Uploaded Chapter 15
-29/11/2015 - Uploaded Chapter 16
-30/11/2015 - Uploaded Chapter 17
-2/12/2015 - Uploaded Chapter 18


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WARNING – MATURE CONTENT ( You have been warned! )

Additional Tag/s : Modern World Setting [ Earth ], Wuxia , Probably Xianxia in the future, Blood, Gore, Sexual Content


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Author's Note : Please forgive my crappy sypnosis, for anyone that is reading this, but please give this fiction a read before you actually drop it 

Please drop some reviews so that I may know where I have erred and will try my best to improve!

Chapter updates / uploads / releases have no timed schedule but if it does get updated, it will definitely be three thousand words and above so do not worry :D

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This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, places and incidents are simply products of the author's imagination. Any resemblance to actual events, locations or people, living or dead are purely coincidental and should not be taken seriously.
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AnarchyDev
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Promising novel.. Hope it continues to a conclusion 

Promicent
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you must read this awesome story!!!

dont get fool by the lame synopsis(sory waffie :p )currently it only hv 3 chaps but the length of evrychap will not dissapointed you..story style also good and no grammar mistake…not much review i can give now especially for story rating and character(3 chapter lol) but you guys must read it!!! well…i will edit this review after..mybe chapter 20 xD

Arkham
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This story is, without a doubt, great. The MC is a character with so much potential for future development and the grammar is great. The chapters are quite lengthy, however I find that some of the fight scenes and some parts drag on too much. But still this is one fantastic story and I hope you keep on writing and won\'t stop this.

Thank you so much 

Cambiel
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Ok first nice beginning, i like the way you tell your storie

second ATG is one of my favorite novels and i think you used the incarnation that happend in ATG nicley in your story

third and last i Think i love this fiction so please, please don't end it mid way. ending a story before it's real end is just too sad

 

so i want to thank you for the first couple of chapters and hope you keep going and i love to read more ;)

I'm sure that you will make it to top.

 

AW
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This book has a great story but woman are appearing left and right after each chapter all with perfect Beauty it's annoying to say the least the plot also seems to be zig zag written and doesn't just flow from the pages

Osborn
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Nice story, with lots of potential. The mc is quite likeable and I like his boldness and how he plans to get a harem.

The story/plot seems a bit lacking. Or more like there's no plot at all. But I like the story so far, and it's not necessary to have a grand objective/mission or something. I find some inconsistencies though. The mc is this supposedly master of martial arts (or something like that), and he should have a lot of an easier time fighting some of the punks in the story. I feel that, at times, the author lowers the strength of the mc to make the plot more "interesting", which is a little annoying.

The characters are nice. You could say it's the strong point of this story. Especially the mc. Although I strongly dislike that everyone seems to mistake the mc for a girl. It's like the author finds some joy in this, cause it always happens. And I also find it a little hypocritical of the mc, to complain so much about it but then he goes a willingly pretends to be a girl when it's convenient. But anyways, aside from that, the girls seem fleshed out quite good, and they are not your typical "harem member Nº12".

Style/grammar: I'm very glad to find that there are no changes in POV in this story. How rare and awesome this is! cause I always found them incredibly annoying and a waste of time. I hope it continues like this. There is a flaw, however. The story advances too slowly, almost to a crawl. Every time the mc decides to do something, the author takes lots and lots of time to describe it. Something that should have taken no time to do, ends up being extremely long and a little boring. I think the author should get to the point faster, instead of always being so roundabout.

To resume everything, it's a really good story, and I higly recommend it to everyone. I hope the author writes more chapters as soon as possible! lol

DevilAsura
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A New incredible awesome story!

Nice i hope he will Start training to get powerful again ! Nice story

jchaitanya56
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story pacing is too damn slow

story pacing is too damn slow.story pacing is too damn slow.