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Who said being a God was easy. If you started omniscient; omnipotent and omnipresent then it might be.

However, without those powers it would be a different story entirely. 

This is that story. Adam is thrown into a new world with no choice and no instructions. At least he is a God, whatever that means...

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Ralph Clark
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The grammar is great. And the plot is even better. 

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graet job and keep up the good work!

ZoeH
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I am really enjoying this story, great character development interspersed with excellent description of the game statistics.

My only slight criticism is that there is occasionally too much info about levelling up, which can sometimes slow the pace of the story

Lighthearted, creative and good cliff hangers. Keep up brilliant work. 

Samuel Lebot
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The story have a nice pace, not to fast but not slow either, it's funny and light.

The system is interesting and unique.

grammar seems okay (but i'm not a native speaker)

The only bad point is the MC (He is a bit flat).