Aberrant: Unbound Soul

by Creakloo

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Psychological Anti-Hero Lead High Fantasy Magic Male Lead Reincarnation Strong Lead Xianxia
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity

A downtrodden soul from Earth struggles to reconcile in the afterlife, finding himself trapped in a deep abyss with no conceivable way out. Helplessness and despair are on the verge of victory, their pressure threatening to overwhelm the man until a strange opportunity lands at his feet. 

Shep seizes his chance and finds his way back to the cycle of reincarnation, but now... he's seen too much. Unanswered questions loom behind his every thought, kindling his determination to seek answers. 

With renewed motivation, Shep rejoins the realm of the living in a mystical land. 

He only desires to learn why, but with danger and new mysteries lurking around every corner — his pursuit of the truth becomes much more complicated.

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ILeaveAReviewWhenIDropIt
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I don't know if this is a side effect of dying once but the MC displays high degree of paranioa. He literally fear death, a concept , a law of nature, instead of the possible causes. That desperation born from fear delivers him in the jaws of the lions. And the fact the he did not display characteristics of amalgamation of souls.

Makes me feel that it betrayed my expectations. A powerful Abomination of souls that broke the passage of souls became what seems to be a wild animal back in the corner with its own fear.

I find the constant fear and hopelessness unhealthy for my readings. so yeah.

Majorcats
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Great story. Give it a try

Reviewed at: Chapter 12

Almost 30 days, 12 chapters.  Not sure why this hasn't gotten a review yet.  Maybe people think it is some horror story because of the synopsis and title?  I know I did and just about passed it by.

This is a well written story that I have enjoyed.  The first few chapters did a good job setting up some motivation for the MC.  Dialog is well written.  Few editing issues.

Clausious
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Good Story so far, just one question tho

Reviewed at: Chapter 13

Beautifully written story with great world building and character development so far.

Question for author are his fears just of the void or returning to the void or being used not quite so sure if it's one fear or multiple fears that the MC has.

Michael Parker
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A breath of fresh air

Reviewed at: Chapter 14
  •  Great story so far (Chapter 13). This story has great potential and can't wait to see where it goes. Give it a shot and read till chapter 3-5 to see if it is the right fit for you. 

(Cultivation, Slow Burn, Fleshed-out World)

Aspartame
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Good prologue, which is rare. Also has little to nothing to do with the rest of the story, just a vehicle for "I was reborn with TWO silver spoons." There's people saying otherwise, so I skipped to the current chapter, which started with:

Spoiler: Spoiler

 Maybe there's an explanation for this, but the synopsis and prologue do not match the rest of the story. At all.

Nocebo
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So my review got deleted for breaking rule 1 & 10. So I will start with it. Then after that for another thing. But we will get back to that.

Rule 1: Something constructive! If you write a story about a [REDACTED] that [REDACTED] [REDACTED] [REDACTED] [REDACTED], don't tittle it as unbound!

When the body he got was [REDACTED], I just shrugged. It only meant he will have to [REDACTED].When it comes to light he will have to work as a [REDACTED], I just shrugged. What you do doesn't have to determine what you are.
 
The next part has to be in spoilers, since even with all the redactions (that I had to put to not break rule 10), it counts as writing down the entire plotline. Becouse I couldn't redact ONE word. The one word that ABSOLUTELY can't be redacted, since it is the whole point of my review.
 
And the story. As was proven when my 2nd review got deleted when it wasn't in spoiler tags.
 
Spoiler: Spoiler