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Domenic is a sailor who just wants a life at sea. A brewing war between nations turn the already dangerous seas into something perilous. Domenic is forced into an untenable position, one he escapes with his life – though there is a greater cost he’ll have to pay after his deal with the devil.

Join Domenic as he explores the meaning and cost of both servitude and freedom!

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This story is a true pleasure to read. Characters are alive, believable. MC is a likeable, good guy with decent morals. Plot is original and intriguing, reminding me a little of adventure books from my childhod. And style is exceptional. The first person perspective is a hard one to do well and here author managed it.

Beside the above this story has something which most others on this stite lack - well-written exposition. Author introduces main character allowing the reader to know him, paints the outline of the world in balievable way and drops subtle hints about future. This all made excellent setting. I would gladly buy a paperback of this story.