The Departure

The Departure

by Krahie

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

Within the enigmatic Illian Cluster, a hungry creature named Zev prepares to depart from the space station for good, content to go wherever the cosmos might lead them. When they arrive on planet Hallow, they set a chain of events in motion that could change countless lives, human and otherwise.

Prequel to Night Game.


Krahie's AUU-16 series:

#1Soulless (Apparently)

#2 – Diamond People

#3The Departure

#4Night Game

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A delightful romp with your friendly, neighborhood man eating monster.

Reviewed at: Chapters 9 & 10 – Breakdown

Its not everyday when I find a book that contains some of the elements of my favorite things, but this is one of them. It feels like a particularly good SCP story, with a well developed, horrifying universe, but with the main focus being on the monster, one more sympathetic character, and the occasional victim. Zev is a fun and wacky character who seems innocent and naive, until he kills and eats someone in a hunger fueled rampage as he kills for pleasure and to sate his lust for sustenance. I do particularly enjoy the mystery that his murderous actions unveil, and I would like to see where it goes. All in all, this is a good story, and I hope it stays that way.

Deee
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 I am so happy with this story, every chapter is such an adventure with twists unexpected! I love, love, LOVE zev!!!!