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Adam Murdock, a loving husband to his wife and a caring father of one, became a prisoner of war after the Cyrus Kingdom invaded his home village, Bushel. Offering promises of freedom, both for him and his family, the Cyrus Kingdom forcefully convinced Adam to join the militia. 

Five years later and a war between Cyrus and an equally strong kingdom erupted. Adam now faces the threat of certain death. Set in stone, however, was his will unrelenting; Something not even death could hope to destroy — "You're not done yet. Wake up and change your fate..."

"[A Will That Conquers Death] grants you the Undone System." 

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Gerald
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  • The grammar was good. 
  • The MC background was nice
  • I like the chapter 1
  • Story, Style and world building was poor.

Long story short, at early chapter everyone was insanely overpowered which ruined the story for me. And stop jumping from here to there, focus more on him being an undead and his unique system. 

Dos
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The background story is nice. It's an interesting twist in the genera. 

But just  doesn't pull me in.

I'm going to stop following