Grandpa Sweet Fist

by Ghostman

Original ONGOING Action Comedy Drama Martial Arts Super Heroes Villainous Lead

Sweet Fist was a joke. He has no superpowers. He was merely a guy with some martial arts who dress up in a costume with a candy theme. He said stupid things like 'Sweet Dreams' and 'Choco Punch' when fighting and was an embrassment to the supervillain community. He has just been released after spending twenty years in prison.

Now he got a System, and the System informed the villain that he had many kids and even some grandchildren. The System want the villain to reunite with his family. Failure means death. Only one problem; Sweet Fist never knew he had kids. How was a bad guy supposed to reunite with a family he never knew existed?

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MrHrulgin
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It's not unflawed, but I'm really enjoying it. It took a few chapters for it to find its stride and get past the exposition, but as Sweet Fist starts to interact with people more it's improving.

Saphyron
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Solid story, that is quite enjoyable

Reviewed at: Part 13- Power Fruit

Not much has happened so far so can't go into too many details but the overall story is quite, and do give me a chuckle from time to time. Looking forward to seeing what is coming next.

peterfneill
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Great story i really like the main character and the way the first chapter builds into the story. The choice of powers and there development is also one of the best. I really enjoy supervillain stories and this one is one of the best. There are decent clifhangers on some of the chapters which are a bit short. But that is the only thing i do not like about the story.

Thats all i have to say a very decent story about a subject i enjoy. Its a interesting twist having someone without 20 years of the normal every day life experience suddenly back in society.

I will just repeat my earlier review as you need 200 words to create a advanced review

Great story i really like the main character and the way the first chapter builds into the story. The choice of powers and there development is also one of the best. I really enjoy supervillain stories and this one is one of the best. There are decent clifhangers on some of the chapters which are a bit short. But that is the only thing i do not like about the story.

Thats all i have to say a very decent story about a subject i enjoy. Its a interesting twist having someone without 20 years of the normal every day life experience suddenly back in society.

 

Great story i really like the main character and the way the first chapter builds into the story. The choice of powers and there development is also one of the best. I really enjoy supervillain stories and this one is one of the best. There are decent clifhangers on some of the chapters which are a bit short. But that is the only thing i do not like about the story.

Thats all i have to say a very decent story about a subject i enjoy. Its a interesting twist having someone without 20 years of the normal every day life experience suddenly back in society.

 

Great story i really like the main character and the way the first chapter builds into the story. The choice of powers and there development is also one of the best. I really enjoy supervillain stories and this one is one of the best. There are decent clifhangers on some of the chapters which are a bit short. But that is the only thing i do not like about the story.

Thats all i have to say a very decent story about a subject i enjoy. Its a interesting twist having someone without 20 years of the normal every day life experience suddenly back in society.