To Enter Five Peaks Magical Academy you must have a familiar. Abigail hoped for a bird, maybe an owl like her best friend's, or a cuddly cat or loyal hound. She would have been happy with a particularly smart toad, even.

 

Instead she got you.

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Chapter Name Release Date
Prologue ago
Chapter One ago
Chapter Two ago
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Chapter Five ago
Chapter Six ago
Chapter Seven ago
Chapter Eight ago
Chapter Nine ago
Chapter Ten ago
Chapter Eleven ago
Chapter Twelve ago
Chapter Thirteen ago
Chapter Fourteen ago
Chapter Fifteen ago
Chapter Sixteen ago
Chapter Seventeen ago
Chapter Eighteen ago
Chapter Nineteen ago
Chapter Twenty ago
Chapter Twenty-One ago
Chapter Twenty-Two ago
Chapter Twenty-Three ago
Chapter Twenty-Four ago
Chapter Twenty-Five ago
Chapter Twenty-Six ago
Chapter Twenty-Seven ago
Chapter Twenty-Eight ago
Chapter Twenty-Nine ago
Chapter Thirty ago
Chapter Thirty-One ago
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Chapter Thirty-Four ago
Chapter Thirty-Five ago
Chapter Thirty-Six ago
Chapter Thirty-Seven ago
Chapter Thirty-Eight ago
Omake One ago
Chapter Thirty-Nine ago
Chapter Forty ago
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Chapter Forty-Three ago
Omake Two ago
Chapter Forty-Four ago
Chapter Forty-Five ago
Chapter Forty-Six ago
Chapter Forty-Seven ago
Interlude One ago
Omake Three ago
Chapter Forty-Eight ago
Chapter Forty-Nine ago
Chapter Fifty ago
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Chapter Fifty-Nine ago
Chapter Sixty ago
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Chapter Sixty-Six ago
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Chapter Seventy-Seven ago
Chapter Seventy-Eight ago
Chapter Seventy-Nine ago
Chapter Eighty ago
Afterward ago

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Starveling
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It's a reader's choice, second person point of view, slice-of-life with the cliche plot of imperfect ritual goes horribly right, misunderstandings and hijinks ensue. Depsite that, it's worth a read.

The main character, i.e. you, is the basic archetype necessary for this kind of plot to work. The plot and pacing is a bit disjointed because it's reader's choice.

And I just don't like second person narratives, but I'm sure some people do.

Still, give it a try, it's a nice comedy story. As long as you don't expect a serious delve into magic and eldritch horrors, you'll enjoy it.

Fool
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I Am Empathizing With An Eldritch Horror -- Well Done

Reviewed at: Chapter Thirty-Six

I'm not going to do my usual listing style review. I try to read stories, especially when they hit trending, and put a good word on them if I can. The title, synopsis, and cover really pulled me in. Usually, it's just one of the three, but the combination made me think that this work was probably... terrible. Some sort of tease where I'd get into chapter two or three and find something really unpleasant.

So.

After I binged to the most recent chapter, I realized I'd read it all in one go and had found myself clicking my tongue because there was no more. The author delivered an adorable little, what is this? Slice of Life inspired by someone who felt the influences of Lovecraft and also the Powder Puff Girls?

Madness.

Genius.

Deserves a great rate and a try for anyone with a dry sense of humor. The author could have attracted the attention of any wayward reader. The author got you.

apocolypse101
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This is the tale of a talented young lady who does an unsupervised summoning ritual and rather than getting a normal or even unusual familiar, like a cat, owl, or even dragon, she ends up with an impossiblely powerful and ancient cosmic horror from the great void that takes the form of an adorable young girl who loves cuddling and naps.  Now Abigail has to try, and frequently fail, to teach this cosmic horror about magic, mortal life, morality, and more while still being a student herself.

I adore this story and find it incredibly cute, funny, and entertaining.

READ THIS STORY NOW!

RatMansion
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I have been following this story since close to it's beginning (probably around ch 10 or so). Now that it's finished I feel like now is a good time to review it.

Love crafted is a cute, light hearted story that follows Eldritch Abomination, Dreamer, and her summoner, Abigail, as they putz around at school with their friends. I liked the story quite a bit early on. It isn't high art (the characters are a little bland and naratively not very much happens), but it was fun and funny which I really appreciate. 

That said, at a certain point, maybe around chapter 50 or 60, it felt like the author got bored of the story and it just lost some of that fun. The "ending" that was chapter 80 was abrupt, out of nowhere, boring, and largely unsatisfying. The author dropped the story and gave us a last chapter which I guess is... nice? To be honest my overall experience makes the story hard to recommend, but I am still grateful for the laughs and enjoyment I got from it. The author is currently reworking the story to publish it as an e-book. I hope it gets a better ending and more depth, because at this point, I just don't see it finding any success.

Best of luck RavensDagger.

Mecanimus
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Oh, the joy when you, the unfathomable cosmic entity of the void, discover the pleasures of food, theft and cuddles.

the story addresses the reader as 'you' and that may bother some people. The tone of the story is light but the topics addressed are heavy. There is distinct Adams family kind of humor mixed with the fun part of the cosmic horror adjusting to steampunk society. It's a fun read and I recommend it. 

tormanen
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Strange and otherworldly with tentacle puns

Reviewed at: Chapter Thirty-Five

It's tentacle monster loli and otherworldly powers all in one tiny flesh suit. A bit jaring in some parts decent pace and so far hasn't turned hugs to hentai and it's already 35 chapters in. Does that whole idk whats goin on i'm a space monster from another dimension thing pretty well. 4/5 would recomend. 

jpat1988
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This story amuses me to no end. Super fun and makes me laugh almost every chapter. Definitely worth a look.

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This is a very nice slice of life kind of story which is light enjoyable and fun with a little Lovecraft thrown in. I am making this at chapter 51 I would very much recommend reading the story.   

DraconisViridis
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Cthulu is nice for once!

Reviewed at: Afterward

Cthulu is generally a complete freak horror show I steer clear from by a few dimensions and realities.  This one is the exception that proves the rule - just dont be rude to Abigail.  Also, bring tea sets.  Apparently they're tasty.  The tentacles wil love you with hugs and headpats.

Dradel Lait
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Not much to say except that it is an amazingly cute story with very fun characters.

Oh and English isn't my first language but I didn't see anyone complain about the grammar so I assume it's good.