A Demon's Tail

by Andur

Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

He was born in a dark place, in a world where souls were traded like coins and a person's life wouldn't amount to much. A world where a single misspoken promise could rip you to shreds. On top of everything, his only soul was acting up and mocking him!

It couldn't get much worse in his opinion...

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Author's Comment:

I was asked about reading my work on other sites. The answer is simple: Currently, I am not active in any other networks than royalroadl.com. Only here, I correct mistakes and errors. If you read it anywhere else and have to pay for it or have to deal with an annoying amount of advertisement, You Are Being Betrayed. You would do good if you make other people in that network aware of it. This is a free project of mine for the purpose of having fun. And if people try to make money with it you shouldn't bother visiting their website. The only one whom I actually allowed to have my work on his website is Armaell who invested the time to compile them into pdf. (http://armaell-library.net/author/andur) 

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1 - A Soul For You ago
Chapter 2 - Leaving The Nest ago
Chapter 3 - Demonling and Lizard-thing ago
Chapter 4 - A Deal! ago
Chapter 5 - Gravediggers ago
Chapter 6 - As it is won... ago
Chapter 7 - Heritage! ago
Chapter 8 - Preparations ago
Chapter 9 - Call me Amon ago
Chapter 10 - The Stooges ago
Chapter 11 - Otherwordly Knowledge ago
Chapter 12 - A really shitty place! ago
Chapter 13 - Ignored ago
Chapter 14 - Things to meddle with... ago
Chapter 15 - We meet again! ago
Chapter 16 - Encounter ago
Chapter 17 - The Sneaky Way. ago
Chapter 18 - Getting back! ago
Chapter 19 - Encounters ago
Chapter 20 - Decisions... ago
Chapter 21 - Recruited ago
Chapter 22 - Of tutors and spiders! ago
Chapter 23 - Training and Contracts! ago
Chapter 24 - Of Demons, Devils, and Fae... ago
Chapter 25 - Seven Demons and the Oak ago
Chapter 26 - Seven Demons visit a village! ago
Chapter 27 - Seven Demons at your door. ago
Chapter 28 - Seven Demons in your house! ago
Chapter 29 - Once you get back home ago
Chapter 30 - Goals and Aspirations ago
Chapter 31 - A rotten Egg ago
Chapter 32 - Desires ago
Chapter 33 - Briefing ago
Chapter 34 - Drunk Demons ago
Chapter 35 - Spoils and Research ago
Chapter 36 - The Mystery ago
Chapter 37 - The more you know, the more questions you have... ago
Chapter 38 - Ostreios ago
Chapter 39 - Knowing yourself ago
Chapter 40 - Cutting your ties ago
Chapter 41 - A demon's woe ago
Chapter 42 - A Confluence of Fates ago
Chapter 43 - Demons at War ago
Chapter 44 - Bait ago
Chapter 45 - Solo Run ago
Chapter 46 - Like Demons? ago
Chapter 47 - Impressions and Probabilities ago
Chapter 48 - A Demon's... ago
Chapter 49 - Repercussion? ago
Chapter 50 - Breakfast Tales ago
Chapter 51 - Right into the thick of it! ago
Chapter 52 - Bad, badder, the... ago
Chapter 53 - A Season ends. ago
Chapter 54 - A really busy day. ago
Chapter 55 - Like a fly ago
Chapter 56 - Overslept ago
Chapter 57 - More than one plan ago
Chapter 58 - More Power ago
Chapter 59 - Questions ago
Chapter 60 - Conflict ago
Chapter 61 - Duel ago
Chapter 62 - A Romantic Landscape ago
Chapter 63 - A Matter of Trust ago
Chapter 64 - An Innocent Night ago
Chapter 65 - To play with a Demon's Tail ago
Chapter 66 - Stress Testing! ago
Chapter 67 - Power Triangle ago

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calle55
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So far someone tried to use him as a living dildo. He ate someones tongue and he almost seems semi-posessed by a previous incarnation of himself. It's bound to be a good one.

Atreivahavi
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The story is fluent and has very few grammar mistakes. The story is catching. Demons doing demon things and such in a comical way and I like it. Story pacing and world building is really good. There is one thing that I don't like it.

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

Ciaina
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Infernal planes. Finally "someone" can go crazy without having to put up a facade of morality 😁

Random Passerby
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My rant on andur...... oh yeah and about this book so far.

Reviewed at: Chapter 17 - The Sneaky Way.

I feel that the story is going well so far.  I like the fact of this kind of underdog theme. I am not sure what it is about this that makes it so refreshing.

 

Now for my rant on all of Andur's books.


Why the title?

Weeeeeeell you seeeeee. Most of his books play out like this

. Dude with """A""" name that starts with A. Girl that becomes wife. But wait, they usually fuck before that right???...right. I normally don't have a problem with the repeated sex scenes but enough is enough sometimes, ya know?

And then Dude/main character gets the OP syndrome. You all know what I am talking about right? The character meets authoritarian figures who always think that he is nothing and that he can't do anything, sooooo Dude now shows him up. Oh and also for some reason Dude has a lot of money and/or power because of his awesome awesomeness along with that super ace up the sleeve. When Dude inevitably finds a "bad guy", he murders him, then brings him back to life, rips out his soul, starts tormenting and tearing apart this guy's mind and soul while this guy is screaming out in pain. Honestly aside from everything that's wrong with that I am SURE there are more efficient and discreet ways to do that. I never get why OP characters always go full savage and brutal just to make him look strong. I am serious, EVERY OP character just goes overkill on this poor guy who I'm sure has issues, but that's just a violation of mind and soul, this guy is just a paid merc or something. Not someone who deserves horrible torture.

Then the happy family (there is usually  a child.) continues to basically rule the world and become the main authority.

There waaaaaaasss this slight exception with the agent of the realm.

But that is not this book. This book so far deserves a four star review because it is a refreshing cute underdog story of a small demon exploring the realms.

AvemGamer
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Five chapters in and im already hooked.

The characters are great, grammar is flawless, and the style has that high quality you would expect from Andur.

I've read a lot of fantasy stories here royal road and this is the first i've read that focuses on demonic magic system and how it works. The mechanic of how demons grow strong and are summoned is so good im making it canon in every other fantasy story i've read. 

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

jxlegend
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It’s fine. I read more than what the review shows. 

 

I have become what I've always hated: I need good prose, and I can’t enjoy a book >10% exposition. 

 

Really, the whole “succubus” description/action sequence was the reason I dropped the story, it’s just... clunky.

 

3.5 stars because there’s probably a good story here, I just like the journey and way it is expressed just as much if not more.

omnerabdator
Overall

Same Old Characters, But still fun

Reviewed at: Chapter 13 - Ignored

It took some time, but im finally interested in this series now(ch.13), usually andur gets you hooked in 1-2 chapters, but i think the repetitness of the characters just burned me out, i have been reading about the same characters for 5 years now. I always complain that he should do something new when he starts a new project...but it always wins me over in the end

ImMrMeeseeks
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A new story from Andur with Andur quality

Reviewed at: Chapter 3 - Demonling and Lizard-thing

As the title says this is a new story more in line with Andur's classics, but not one where our main soul remembers anything. Has the same good ole Andur quality as well.

Wutosama
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Make RR Great Again! 

Grassroots Authors Unite! 

Agasthenes
Overall

Good shit instantly hooked again. very interested in the infernal planes.