In one night the world changed. Impossible Spires appeared and with them came terrible monsters and wondrous abilities that defied the laws of science. The safety of everyday life was gone. Survival was thrust into the hands of a woefully unprepared humanity. Now they had no choice, but to fight and grow stronger for the end of their world was only the beginning.
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I like where it's going with it's decent grammar, not much to the story and characters but it's coming along.
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If anything I'd say the noble hero schtik needs some severe tempering. Without absolute power, modern human sensibilities do not survive an apocalyptic scenario. When might can definitively make right, the only way to win is to be a less despotic source of might. I feel the story will either become severely illogical or freeze you in your tracks if you don't begin to curb the mentalities of the characters. Granted, you've only had 18 chapters and in one sense, that's a few months progression, but in another, it's 4 years so this is just me curbing my enthusiasm and hoping for a chapter showing where the MC's headspace is at now.
Apart from some minor grammatical issues, this is a good read. Give it a chance!
Doesn't waste time detailing every single step the MCs make to develop their powers and other stuff that barely qualifies as filler material.
Also, the MC isn't the most powerful in the story. He's strong, sure, but no silly power creep to ruin the lategame.
It's well written but kind of annoying, the chapter nearly entirely composed of dialogue as well as the "now" & "then" format are bothering me.