I WAS A LONER, BUT MY CLASS GOT SUMMONED TO ANOTHER WORLD AND NOW…

by Reminisce~Flight

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Romance Harem High Fantasy LitRPG Magic Male Lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai

A class consisting of twenty-three individuals was suddenly transported to another world. There, in a medieval-like setting, they were told to help humanity through a war that has already begun between the larger frontier kingdoms.

Within those in the class, some have made the choice to help from the beginning but not all were given convenient abilities to fight with.

For our main character, a Loner who always lived separately from the rest, he was given a power that was contrary to his way of living and how it will change him through the course of his newfound journey.

Weekly Release: Wednesday and Saturday

Artwork: DeviantArt Loner Gallery

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EleMentalPhoenix
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I really like the premise of this story. Stand at the point of writing this, the chapter count is 18. 

Now to get in detail and starting with

Story: Summoned Classroom  MC is the outsider. Standart stuff, but the story so far didnt disappoint in general quality and there are many promising leads and hints so far. 

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 Character: Everyone reacts as one would expect them to, or how a newly summoned hero observes them. A handful of interesting persons got introduced, the most others are the bland mix of background character, i like the mix ^^

Grammar: I didnt see any obvious errors, but am no native speaker, so. Its good to read
 
Style: Can hold your attention and let you grave for more chapters, as good and promising stories should. 
 
To my fellow readers: Give it a try, its worth your read
 
To the author: Keep up the good work, I'll keep reading ^^
Omnis Ra
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Story was pretty good. Even though the genre is done multiple times (even by me) I was really drawn into the story.

ManOverBoard
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(This is my opinion of the first 10 chapters.)

I came expecting a generic story of a class being summoned to another world with some kind of twist but got quickly dissapointed. The first 6-7 chapters felt like someone was rewriting Arifureta but the author only heard the story in passing. Besides that there are quite a few problems that grinded my gears so lets start from the beginning. 

Style: Honestly, I hated it. The whole story is written in first person (which I am not a big fan of but I read anought good stories with it) and I got to say it got annoying real fast by how the author expressed what MC did and thought. Most of it could be summarized in one sentence: I thought that and I did that. All self monologues and decisions are written in such way. 

Story: Well, like I mentioned before the story just felt like a rewritten Arifureta story, with added ideas from Shield hero. Nothing terrible but nothing excepcionally good either. Don't come here expecting something new.

Grammar: Well I can't really say it is bad besides a few sentence mistakes and quotes not ending where they are suppose to. 

Characters: I consider that to be the biggest weakness in this story. The main character felt a bit edgy at first, being lone wolf and all, but the way he just accepted being summoned to another world for granted (besides a few other things) started to annoy me. It also felt a bit weird that for someone who has no interest in other people just decide to help them out of the blue. Add his own chivarly code and we get a really strange mix. The other characters are not much better (but since I only read up to chapter 10 I hope they will improve).

Magicor
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The story isn't bad but it just wouldn't work out in real life situations.

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 No offense to Pokemon but the real world is cutthroat. Nobles, politics, wars, and Demons are the base of this story. Winners write the history and there's no room for rainbows or sunshine.

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 Good luck with your story man, this isn't meant to be mean or anything. I'm sure it will be a great story for kids.