Tales of a killer flower

by X237

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Dungeon GameLit LitRPG Magic Non-Human lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Reincarnation
Warning This fiction contains:
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Warning: Contains gore

Killed while working his everyday job, Joe found himself reincarnated as a rose. Not only that, but he was also inside of a dark cave, in front of a starving bison? Equipped with modern knowledge, how will Joe survive in this new, strange world.

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BruhMan
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Not much to go by but good so far.

Reviewed at: Level up!

There really isn't much to say, there isn't really any glaring negatives or positives, so I'm just going to rate it based on my personal enjoyment factor. 

Note:I didn't say much as there isn't much to go by with only 4 chapters.

 

4 / 5 - enjoyable

CoCop
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This story is pretty clearly an homage to Chrysalis, but Chrysalis is great so that really isn't a bad thing.

Per its title, it's a reincarnation/system story (and gets bonus points for not using a truck/blue boxes).  The main character is reincarnated as a rose and proceeds to go on adventures while raising its rank.  Nothing terribly new (other than being a plant) but well enough done to easily be worth a read.

Style: My only complaint is that things move a little too quickly.  The main character is only running from one emergency to another while gaining xp.  I'm only taking a half point off because it is still very smoothly written and engaging.

Grammar: There were one or two word choice issues (Might instead of Mite etc) but not enough to take off a point.

Story: There really isn't much of a story so far outside of 'survival' and things have been going a bit fast.  Again, this isn't meant to be a 'bad score' but more of a 'placeholder' until we learn more about the world.

Character: The only character is Joe the Flower who is interesting, but a bit over the top and flighty.  He's almost erratic enough for me to worry about him being an unreliable narrator, but other than that he's a very solid main character.

Summary: A promising reincarnation/start from the bottom novel that's well enough written that you won't have to abandon it halfway due to plot/grammar/sylistic errors.

Gible
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I love it, might have some misspelled words but if we find it the author fixes it, Its even better because I'm 80% sure it won't get a human form so that's amazing and what's best is ITS NOT A HAREM WOOOOO. Over all Its amazing and great, I have no complaints.

Dargon
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Not great grammer, but good enough to be understandable.