The Aria Chronicles

by Josephine Xavier

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Romance Female Lead High Fantasy Magic Male Lead Mythos Strong Lead War and Military
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Sexual Content

A Car crash later Luna finds herself in a completly different world, a world full of magic and myths. 

A world where monsters raged and Bloodlines ruled, experience the wonderful adventures of luna in the magical world of Aria. 

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
The World Of Aria ago
Vampire I ago
Vampire II ago
Vampire III ago
Crystal Nymph ago
Fake Funeral ago
Bloodline Enhancements ago
Celestial Grade Moonwell Method I ago
Celestial Grade Moonwell Method II ago
Brother ago
Cosmic Flame Soul Refining Tower Method ago
Grade 2 Telekinesis Artifact ago
Leaving I ago
Leaving II ago
Lilith Eden ago
Songstress ago
Pirates I ago
Pirates II ago
Un Veiled ago
Taken I ago
Taken II ago
Orgasm I ago
Orgasm II ago
Three Energies ago
Bloodline Ability Carnal Siphoning ago
Torturous Practice I ago
Torturous Practice II ago
Torturous Practice III ago
late Night Banging I ago
late Night Banging II ago
late Night Banging III ago
Blackstaff City I ago
Blackstaff City II ago
Blood Oath ago
Master Ramon ago
You want me became a whore? ago
Soul Restricting Seal ago
Madeline's Bracelet ago
Carl ago
Dem ago
Body Refining I ago
Body Refining II ago
All Of Them ago
Your Presence Is Requested ago
War In North ago
Crush ago
Limit ago
Intense Training ago
New Toys ago
Level Up ago
Last Day ago
To War ago
Kinky ago
Attacked ago
Crash ago
Battle I ago
Battle II ago
Decapitated ago
Vampiric Blade ago
Fatal Charm I ago
Fatal Charm II ago
Night Killings ago

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vladerag
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Before I begin, I just want to say that I have a sneaking suspicion that English is not the author's naitive language.  If my suspicion is correct, there is probably another version of this web novel out there written in the author's naitive tongue that lacks the crippling issues that this one does.

So far, the story's grammar and syntax can only be described as consistently poor.  It is not unintelligible, however.  In fact, I would go so far as to say that the errors, while numerous, do not interfere with comprehension at all.  It does, on the other hand, interfere with the reader's enjoyment.  Whether it can be understood or not, a poorly written sentence is still poorly written.

Regardless, passing that hurdle and moving on to the actual story, I can only describe it as rushed.  I kind of get the feeling that the author had specific scenes they wished to write and glossed over all the details and events that weren't involved in those scenes.  It is a little hard to describe what is missing, because context is firmly established.

It is missing the little things; the details that turn a report into a story.  It is the difference between: "Jack and Jill went up the hill to fetch a pail of water.  Jack fell down, and broke his crown, and Jill came tumbling after." and "Jill accompanied Jack as he went to fetch water for mother's garden from the well up the hill.  The two of them alone at the top, Jack gave Jill a roguish smile and told her that she had a nice ass as he asked her out on a date.  Jill, of course, slapped him so hard he spun around and fell down the hill, eventually hitting his head against a rock at the bottom.  But Jill had lost her balance too, and ended up following him down."

The essence of the story is the same, and the extra details don't really matter if all you want is the basic rundown, but those details give the world and characters life.  Without them, the story feels mechanical, shallow, and lifeless.  Like it is being put through the motions of a story without actually telling one.

yuru1997
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Nice story but hard to read

Reviewed at: Vampire II

 The story is nice so far but the writing is klunky and doesnt relly let you get immersed, if the writing was cleaned up it would become a really great story,

i hope that the author continues writing this story and maybe comes back later to fix it up a bit

I dont think that the story itself needs all that much, or any, work. just keep going as you are

veted
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This fiction contains: Sexual Content? Now that's an understatement.

As per title, it is what it is, so be advised if you are looking for something else. I would have liked to do a ratings free 'review' without judgement, but that's not really possible.

It has vampires, magic, bloodlines, fighting, sex and a protagonist who likes to use 'em. Sadly for me I'm just plain not into smut or even ecchi, really. So I have to admit I started skipping ahead when the sex themes came up to see if it was a recurring thing and yes, it seems to be a part of the main narrative.

JustSmile
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Nope. Grammar, syntax, spelling, there's nothing done right here. There might be a passable story buried under the incoherent writing, but I'll never know due to the writer's utter inability to use English in a comprehensible manner. I'll just quote a single sentence from the first chapter as an example - and no, it's not even the worst one, nor does it get better.

 

"There are more than a thousand people are fighting, all of them are fighting with the superhuman ability with all sorts of weapons in their hand’s Swords, Shield, Spears, Knives, Guns, they are using everything."

 

Frankly, asking for money with writing that'd get you a failing grade on a middle school essay seems shameless.