The Aria Chronicles

The Aria Chronicles

by Josephine Xavier

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Sexual Content

A Car crash later Luna finds herself in a completly different world, a world full of magic and myths. 

A world where monsters raged and Bloodlines ruled, experience the wonderful adventures of luna in the magical world of Aria. 

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
The World Of Aria ago
Vampire I ago
Vampire II ago
Vampire III ago
Crystal Nymph ago
Fake Funeral ago
Bloodline Enhancements ago
Celestial Grade Moonwell Method I ago
Celestial Grade Moonwell Method II ago
Brother ago
Cosmic Flame Soul Refining Tower Method ago
Grade 2 Telekinesis Artifact ago
Leaving I ago
Leaving II ago
Lilith Eden ago
Songstress ago
Pirates I ago
Pirates II ago
Un Veiled ago
Taken I ago
Taken II ago
Orgasm I ago
Orgasm II ago
Three Energies ago
Bloodline Ability Carnal Siphoning ago
Torturous Practice I ago
Torturous Practice II ago
Torturous Practice III ago
late Night Banging I ago
late Night Banging II ago
late Night Banging III ago
Blackstaff City I ago
Blackstaff City II ago
Blood Oath ago
Master Ramon ago
You want me became a whore? ago
Soul Restricting Seal ago
Madeline's Bracelet ago
Carl ago
Dem ago
Body Refining I ago
Body Refining II ago
All Of Them ago
Your Presence Is Requested ago
War In North ago
Crush ago
Limit ago
Intense Training ago
New Toys ago
Level Up ago
Last Day ago
To War ago
Kinky ago
Attacked ago
Crash ago
Battle I ago
Battle II ago
Decapitated ago
Vampiric Blade ago
Fatal Charm I ago
Fatal Charm II ago
Night Killings ago
Battling Elite ago
Ancient Bull Charge ago
Munching ago
Camp ago
Merit And Money ago
Affair Fantasy I ago
Affair Fantasy II ago
Standing 69 (18+) ago
Wheelbarrow (18+) ago
Dark Blue Seals ago
Record And Transmit ago
45th Sequence Of Refining ago
Northern Command ago
Shopping ago
Mask ago
Hilnet City ago
Motorcade ago
Chaotic Battle I ago
Chaotic Battle II ago
Chaotic Battle III ago
Chaotic Battle IV ago
Last Fight I ago
Last Fight II ago
Twenty Four Spinning Threads ago
Twenty Four Spinning Threads II ago
Twenty Four Spinning Threads III ago
Attack I ago
Attack II ago
Attack III ago
Sudden Changes I ago
Sudden Changes II ago
Retreat ago
Reaching Destination ago
Mercenaries Of Chameleon ago
TOP ago
Outside I ago
Outside II ago
Slaughter ago
Bloody I ago
Bloody II ago
Ten Minutes Distance ago
Running Away ago
Returning To Camp ago
Spring ago
Having Richard (18+) ago
Having Richard II (18+) ago
Seventh Pillar ago
Secret Techniques ago
Hiding ago
Killing Elite I ago
Killing Elite II ago
Close! ago
Bashing ago
Seeing Dwarf Again ago
Asael's Way Of Body Manipulation ago
Asael’s Way Of Body Manipulation II ago
Extermination ago
Return ago
Blazing Hot ago
Searing Cold ago
Before Dawn ago
Passion ago
Passion I ago
Date ago
Abduction I ago
Abduction II ago
Abduction III ago
Who Will Fuck? ago
Mendez I (18+) ago
Mendez II (18+) ago
Mendez III (18+) ago
Mendez IV (18+) ago
Secret Training ago
Secret Training II ago
Secret Training III ago
Pain and Pleasure I ago
Pain and Pleasure II ago
Finished ago
Peak Knight ago
Steam I ago
Steam II ago
Steam III ago
Baron I ago
Baron II ago
Strong Threads ago
Mystical ago
Kill I ago
Kill II ago
Kill III ago
Changing Paths ago
Blood Burn I ago
Blood Burn II ago
Blood Burn III ago
Blood Burn IV ago
End ago
Healing Injuries ago
Healing Tonic ago
Maps ago
Pearls I ago
Pearls II ago
Pearls III ago
Out! ago
Dark Night ago
He Had Came Finally! ago
Meeting ago
House Arrest ago
House Arrest II ago
Taming ago
Taming II ago
Return ago
Isabell ago
Isabell II ago
Isabell III ago
Count ago

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vladerag
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Before I begin, I just want to say that I have a sneaking suspicion that English is not the author's naitive language.  If my suspicion is correct, there is probably another version of this web novel out there written in the author's naitive tongue that lacks the crippling issues that this one does.

So far, the story's grammar and syntax can only be described as consistently poor.  It is not unintelligible, however.  In fact, I would go so far as to say that the errors, while numerous, do not interfere with comprehension at all.  It does, on the other hand, interfere with the reader's enjoyment.  Whether it can be understood or not, a poorly written sentence is still poorly written.

Regardless, passing that hurdle and moving on to the actual story, I can only describe it as rushed.  I kind of get the feeling that the author had specific scenes they wished to write and glossed over all the details and events that weren't involved in those scenes.  It is a little hard to describe what is missing, because context is firmly established.

It is missing the little things; the details that turn a report into a story.  It is the difference between: "Jack and Jill went up the hill to fetch a pail of water.  Jack fell down, and broke his crown, and Jill came tumbling after." and "Jill accompanied Jack as he went to fetch water for mother's garden from the well up the hill.  The two of them alone at the top, Jack gave Jill a roguish smile and told her that she had a nice ass as he asked her out on a date.  Jill, of course, slapped him so hard he spun around and fell down the hill, eventually hitting his head against a rock at the bottom.  But Jill had lost her balance too, and ended up following him down."

The essence of the story is the same, and the extra details don't really matter if all you want is the basic rundown, but those details give the world and characters life.  Without them, the story feels mechanical, shallow, and lifeless.  Like it is being put through the motions of a story without actually telling one.

YuriDhjeeyn
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Nice story but hard to read

Reviewed at: Vampire II

 The story is nice so far but the writing is klunky and doesnt relly let you get immersed, if the writing was cleaned up it would become a really great story,

i hope that the author continues writing this story and maybe comes back later to fix it up a bit

I dont think that the story itself needs all that much, or any, work. just keep going as you are

JustSmile
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Nope. Grammar, syntax, spelling, there's nothing done right here. There might be a passable story buried under the incoherent writing, but I'll never know due to the writer's utter inability to use English in a comprehensible manner. I'll just quote a single sentence from the first chapter as an example - and no, it's not even the worst one, nor does it get better.

 

"There are more than a thousand people are fighting, all of them are fighting with the superhuman ability with all sorts of weapons in their hand’s Swords, Shield, Spears, Knives, Guns, they are using everything."

 

Frankly, asking for money with writing that'd get you a failing grade on a middle school essay seems shameless.

 

Draconic
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This is good. Kinda. The best proof of this is the fact that this story made me suffer through more than 90 chapters with that terrible grammar.

Sure, it's nowhere near perfect. At times, it even feels like it's all about sex. Don't believe for a moment, that the only 18+ chapters are the two that have 18+ in their title. I have no idea why the author decided to put a warning on exactly those two chapters.

The story is good. Most of the characters are not really well developed, but still allright. A bit too many fight and sex chapters for genuine character development, but all in all, I must say I enjoyed it. Though it could be that I was just in the mood for something like this.

But let's get to the main problem. The grammar and the writing style. Oh. My. God. I have read machine translations, that were better than this. Seriously. You think it's a mistake that I titled my review "minuits"? That word was driving me crazy! How is it possible that someone misspells the word "minute" exactly the same way just about every single time it is used? And that is just the most obvious. Sentence structure is often broken, words are missing, and the wrong words are used. Mistakes like "I" instead of "It." This last one is especially annoying after quotations, where it confuses you about who was talking. And of course, there are many others.

 

P.S.: I find it very funny, that the author is always advertising those extra 20 patreon chapters. Especially after I checked it out, and realised that I would need to pay 4 times as much for this, as I would for the extra 20 Azarinth Healer patreon chapters.

veted
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This fiction contains: Sexual Content? Now that's an understatement.

As per title, it is what it is, so be advised if you are looking for something else. I would have liked to do a ratings free 'review' without judgement, but that's not really possible.

It has vampires, magic, bloodlines, fighting, sex and a protagonist who likes to use 'em. Sadly for me I'm just plain not into smut or even ecchi, really. So I have to admit I started skipping ahead when the sex themes came up to see if it was a recurring thing and yes, it seems to be a part of the main narrative.

Shade of The Nightingale
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Okay I want to preface this review by saying that the idea and story behind this (fetishistic wish fulfillment) piece is sound and interesting while being complex and Well fleshed out... However author writes it to fulfill their fetish to be kidnapped, enslaved, and raped. As of where I am in the story by this point author has thrown away all falsehoods on this. And frankly it's disgusting. I wouldnt have even had an issue IF I HAD BEEN WARNED but nope, author takes readers down their fetish rabbit hole with no warning of just how depraved it gets. Sexually explicit content tag is too broad to NOT put an explicit warning for a piece like this. Also on that note this site may allow any form of writing but always remember your writing should maintain a sense of decorum fitting it's theme depravity in and of itself isn't the issue, it's just not what readers came here for.

Radix Malorum
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Solid premise and story. Broken English and massive infodumps.

Reviewed at: Songstress

Solid premise and story.  Very broken English and huge infodumps at least in the first chapters.  English is obviously not the author's first language because grammer is terrible and some sentences make no sense.  The story and premise is your typical truck-San isekai except the mc merges with an existing person in the new world and retains all her memories.  The problem is the author throws in massive infodumps at least you in beginning chapters explaining all the details of the cultivation system.  There was no need for this.  The author could've kept things more vague and slowly released this info to the reader as the story progressed.  Having to read literally dozens of paragraphs of infodumps in consecutive chapters wasn't fun.

ishner
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Moderately interesting.

Reviewed at: Returning To Camp

The coherence improves by a lot over time, eventually reaching normality. Beyond that it is a perfectly passable pseudo xianxia with some interesting variations. I particularly like that while the MC has some blatantly OP abilities, it is not all the very best.

A few chapters are mediocre smut, but easily skippable.

Morkail
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A good cultivation story.. also sex vampire

Reviewed at: Crash

Over all a damn fine story it’s still only the very beginning as you expect from a cultivation story but I feel drawn in to the world and want to keep reading and yes the main character is a sex vampire but that comes across as her stealing power from people then normal smut over all in my follow list well worth a read and very well writin.

Pallakonto
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The setting concept is nothing new, but it's done fairly well. However, the constant abuse of the English language (spelling, grammar, syntax, and usage) interferes with any flow the story might have.