After struggling to make sense of the arcane mysteries of the denizens of Earth with anime as my guide to the mysteries of the universe, I attained wizardry at the age of 30— then, I found myself in a mysterious egg reborn as a girl!
What's worse, I soon find out I'm not just a normal girl...
I didn't know what to do for most on my life on Earth. I don't know what's going on here. So, same as always. I'll understand this world and reach the pinnacle! Or something! Maybe!
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It tries to hard to be a fast paced comedy and fails too hard. Continuously repeating bad jokes, drains the reader. Whats endless repetitions of I'm pathetic and whines about things the MC can't do are repulsive
I laughed trough my entire read of this story. Very hard hitting comedy that you rarely find nowadays. Comparable to the like of My Immortal !!!
I, as an individual with Autism Spectrum Disorder, have been dealing with it since elementary school, and who has spent a lot of time in self-analysis, can say that this story is an innacurate and, to be frank, rather insulting depiction of the disorder. The first chapter alone is evidence enough of this extremely poor understanding of the condition.
I was rather excited to see a story with the Psychological tag that involved an autistic main character, but it would seem that my excitement was heavilyl misplaced.
Either get someone with firsthand or professional experience to advise you on how individuals with mental conditions experience the world, or do not use that mental condition in your work. It isn't a character trait, a personallity, or something to be taken lightly, it is a serious psychological condition, one that many struggle with.
I recommend you remove this fiction.