Dark Wind, Icy Snow - (RyuTar, YinYuan) [BL]
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Born a fatherless bastard, Nox ZaiWin has always been seen as a pariah by those around him. It doesn’t matter how hard he has tried to make a name for himself, excelling both in combat and military strategy, climbing all the way to his present position as Calzai by sheer hard work and persistence.
His only goal? To be left alone so he can govern over his poor, ravaged Province in peace.
And so, yeah, the last thing he wanted, was to become some Celestial’s Chosen One.
And is that even a Celestial? Hasn’t the brat just murdered more than one-hundred of his men with a single scream? Aren’t Celestials supposed to be holly, pure beings, that abhor all forms of death and killing?
No other choice! No matter how sinful it may be, the brat must die.
Snow has lived most of his life locked in a dark room, explored and sold for his miraculous blood. There are a lot of things he does not understand about the outside world. But one thing is certain. He does not want to have anything to do with some scary dark monster. He wants to be free! And he’ll do whatever it takes to reach his goal.
And yet … Shit! Aren’t they stuck together now? Their life-lines intertwined?
Wait! If the dark monster wants him dead, that’s easy enough to solve. All he has to do is to successfully kill him first!
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First off, credit for the LGBT representation, which I don't see a lot of on this site. The world of this story seems engaging, and there is some thought to the characters.
However, I am personally struggling with the sentence structure. There are a lot of run-on sentences filled with comma after comma. Many of the descriptive words are often repeated within the same paragraph (which is often just one or two very long sentences). The results are hard to follow, particularly when dealing with descriptions of magic/action.
I've love to attempt this again after it's been polished a bit!
There isn't too much to go off of at the time I'm writing this but from what I've read so far, this book is great and I hope it continues to be this way. The only thing that I've noticed as a problem is an over-use of pronouns, which makes it somewhat hard to understand who is doing what at times, this is only a minor issue and could be from not many names being given since this is the beginning of the story, along with a few seemingly missing words that's all the issues I've found.
this is one of the first stories i read on this site. it will always be one of my favorites. i know stories with lgbt representation arent treated nicely on this sitte but dont give up author. this is a very engaging story. good characters, gpod story, good relationship, good world building.
style is good but a bit weird at times but its probably teh genre. story is good. gramar is good. characters are great. youve written a lot so far and we were just about to get into things. dont give up. reviews have to be long. so i wantto encourage you and get your star rating up because yoyu desrve to be rated higher. dont give up author, dont give up. just reread the first couple of your chapters to get a feel for the story again becuase it is a really great story. not a lot of stories like this on royal road.
why do reviews have to be so long long long long. dont give up. good story and character. please come back. i want to see how it ends word filler word filler word filler word filler. i hope my review convinces you to return