The Goblin Nation

by Joshua Peralta

Original ONGOING Fantasy High Fantasy Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters Reincarnation
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They should have fought back. They felt his disdain, but no one wanted to believed - believe that they were never loved. That they can just appease him again. Sacrifice their lives again. Conquered their enemies again. Built wonders for his majesty again. And when they finally accepted the truth, it brought them to their knees as his machines burned down their wonders and reduced them back into animals.

But there was still hope. The Stellars told of our survival. Our downfall was just the beginning. Our regression into animals was merely a delay. At the time, our people were split into different tribes. Before the doors to the infinite sea are open. There will be a child born to stand against his machines, born to challenge his majesty. And with a sword in one hand and a scepter on the other, that child - that hero, will lead his kingdom. The kingdom of goblins.

Sun, the goblin child born to save all of goblin kind. A former human from an unknown world died and reborn with little memory of his past. Join him as he takes on the world, make new friends, uncover the secret of his past, and lead the goblin kind from the darkness.

---- The Goblin Nation has two different schedule updates. 

Standard schedule updates on Mondays, Wednesdays, and Fridays. 

On Break schedule updates on Tuesday and Thursday. ----

Currently on On Break Schedule

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Vol 1 Chapter 1: Newborn ago
Vol 1 Chapter 2:Hunger Strikes ago
Vol 1 Chapter 3: The Bear ago
Vol 1 Chapter 4: The Strong Ones ago
Vol 1 Chapter 5: The Mother ago
Vol 1 Chapter 6: Winter is Coming ago
Vol 1 Chapter 7: Jet Engines ago
Vol 1 Chapter 8: Close Call [Stick POV] ago
Vol 1 Chapter 9: The Dilemma [Smoke POV] ago
Vol 1 Chapter 10: What It Means To Be Strong [Rock POV] ago
Vol 1 Chapter 11: Lust [Cala POV] ago
Vol 1 Chapter 12: Recovery ago
Vol 2 Chapter 1: Revelation ago
Vol 2 Chapter 2: The Tutors ago
Vol 2 Chapter 3: A Stinky Solution ago
Vol 2 Chapter 4: Brains And Fawn ago
Vol 2 Chapter 5: Goat Me By Surprise ago
Vol 2 Chapter 6: Helping Hand ago
Vol 2 Chapter 7: Today A Reader, Tomorrow A Healer ago
Vol 2 Chapter 8: Storm Is Brewing ago
Vol 2 Chapter 9: The Three Beast ago
Vol 2 Chapter 10: Starving Tribe ago
Vol 2 Chapter 11: Over The Garden Wall ago
Vol 2 Chapter 12: Back At The Barnyard ago
Vol 2 Chapter 13: Bomber Man ago
Vol 2 Chapter 14: Red Cross ago
Vol 2 Chapter 15: Sun Eater ago
Vol 2 Chapter 16: Moving Forward ago
Vol 3 Chapter 1: Does The Black Moon Howl? ago
Vol 3 Chapter 2: Tip of the Sword ago
Vol 3 Chapter 3: Appeal to Authority ago
Vol 3 Chapter 4: Illuminated Manuscript ago
Vol 3 Chapter 5: House of the Rising Sun ago
Vol 3 Chapter 6: The Sun Stands Still ago
Vol 3 Chapter 7: Old Words New Faces ago
Vol 3 Chapter 8: Burning Love ago
Vol 3 Chapter 9: Cloud Nine ago
Vol 3 Chapter 10: Attack on Troll ago
Vol 3 Chapter 11: Lover Boy ago
Vol 3 Chapter 12: The Red Roof ago
Vol 3 Chapter 13: Only To Startle The Sun ago
Vol 4 Chapter 1: Better Days ago
Vol 4 Chapter 2: Run Boy Run ago
The Power of Friendship ago
Cradle to the Grave ago

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Pez
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 As of wirting this, this story has less than 3*'s.  I'm not certain why.  It's certainly not a perfect story, but it's still good.

 

The MC's pre-reincarnated backstory is very odd.  I'm not certain I understand it.  I think it really has more to do with his 'nice guy' personality than anything, so until more is revealed, I'm not considering it a big deal.

 

There's a big world out there, and we're only getting really tiny glimpses of it, as only the MC's mother really has anything to offer in that regards.  We learn a small amount about other Goblins, but everything is mostly on our newborn MC.  And like most portrayals of them, Goblins are pretty horrible creatures.

 

There have been a decent number of 'MC is a monster' stories lately, and I think this one deserves a chance.

ShaneL2018
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Good start Just Fix Inconsistencies

Reviewed at: Vol 4 Chapter 2: Run Boy Run

This isn't a bad take on the genre. Interesting elements but the intellectual changes in the "halfbreeds" are wildly inconsistent - sometimes they are half imbeciles with guttural thinking and at other times are almost "super goblins". Very jarring but easy to fix - explain how they get smarter and then keep them at a consistent level of conversation.