The North Star

The North Star

by OmegaSenju

Warning This fiction contains:
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Thousands of years ago the "Great Darkness" occurred after the Dark God Siwang attempted a coup in order to take over the God Realm. This event went down in history as the greatest war that ever happened as human practitioners of the mystic arts fought alongside gods in order to defeat the Dark God. After the Dark God was defeated his soul was sealed in an amulet and locked away in the God Realm, never to be unleashed again. But years later faithful servants of the god stole the amulet and returned it to the Mortal World. Since then the amulet containing the Dark God's soul has been missing with no clues towards its whereabouts. Until now that is.

A young boy named Bei Xing has a faitful experience within his family's mine which leads to him stumbling across the amulet and meeting the Dark God. But the stories that Bei Xing heard about the Great Darkness growing up are nothing like what Siwang says actually happened.

Follow along the story of Bei Xing as he goes on an adventure to right the wrongs of the past and help a friend in need. He will face countless adversaries, demon beasts, and even Gods on this journey of epic proportions.

But remember that in a world shrouded in mystery, everything is not always as it seems...

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The fiction story starts off very slow-paced and focuses on the character development of the mc (Bei Xing). This is something a lot of novels lack and really allows you to feel empathy for him.

The novel actually foreshadows some events at the start and usually you would be able to predict it when it comes to your typical 'cultivation' genre story however for once I actually had no clue of what was coming next, and *spoiler alert* chapter 3 was quite shocking.

It's honestly worth the read if you have any time at all. I was already hooked when chapter 1 was released, but chapter 3 has now left me thirsting for more.

Thank you for your hard work OmegaSenju! 

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Definitely recommend giving this a read, even if reading is not your think I promise you this will keep your eyes glued on, mouth wide open, and ready for more. This guy is one of the most dedicated hardest working person I know.