DELETED (THREE)

DELETED (THREE)

by Asviloka

Original DROPPED Fantasy

This story's content has been moved to my 'Unfinished Beginnings' collection.

This file may be reused in future, but for now it is empty.

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Asviloka

Asviloka

Just Add Magic!

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MrBadWithNames
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Seeing as this is only the first chapter it could go any way from here, y'know - but this chapter has good worldbuilding(s), an interesting magic system, clearly visible progression in their mental state/approach to life and most importantly there is a goal!