Mine from the Abyss

by Jisatsu Sakuru

Original ONGOING Adventure Comedy Fantasy Horror Anti-Hero Lead Dungeon High Fantasy LitRPG Magic Non-Human lead Strategy Villainous Lead
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A dungeon core awakens into its new life. With barely any time to understand its own existence, a group of goblins appears, seeking to settle in the dungeon. In the name of self preservation the dungeon core begins creating abominations that will terrify the world. By breaking all the conventional rules of creating a dungeon, this core develops into an unwitting monster, seeking to undo the status-quo of the world it finds itself in.

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Bizmatech
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Cute Chaos and Freaky Fun

Reviewed at: Chapter 11

The happiest hellscape ever created.

Friendly nightmare fuel.

Adorable abominations.

It's been a while since I added something to my favorites list so quickly. I wish there were more chapters out already, but that's alright. I can tell that it'll be a fun ride.

My only complaint is that the formatting is kinda inconsistant. Some of the paragraphs look like they were meant to be two or three, but got squished together when they were pasted to RRs chapter upload page. But meh. It's stil legible.

Wardozer
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Not bad, but not great - As of Chapter 13

Reviewed at: Chapter 13

The concept of the story is interesting and enjoyable, but the writing needs work.  It jumps tenses constantly.  Still worth a read to see if it is something you would like.

Blackguard
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Bumbling into hell in the best way.

Reviewed at: Chapter 6

A unique and whimsical dungeon core. Somehow so innocent they accidentally wind up creating nightmare beasts. The characters have a great amount of personality, which is so needed in a dungeon core story. From a Menu who gets huffy at being ignored to minions who wind up monkey's palming themselves and wind up loving it even more.

Give this growing dungeon a shot and you won't be disappointed.

avk
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My little Goblin: Friendship is magic

Reviewed at: Chapter 13

Take a little cosmic horror, add in a lot of stupidity and you have the recipe for disastrous success.

Swordofmytriumph
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I am a sucker for dungeon core books, can't resist even a brand new one. I like the voice of the dungeon so far, its personality is kinda whimsical, which I'm enjoying. Also, great job on the editing! :) 

DJCatmemes
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Can't wait to see where this goes.

Reviewed at: Chapter 9

I have so much fun reading this and get so excited when a new chapter comes up. I love that all of the characters have a distinct personality. Even though there is not a visual representation of the characters or structures, I can easily imagine them in my head. 

The Dolphin
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Abominations are always nice

Reviewed at: Chapter 10

<p>A very interesting story that manages to have very enjoyable interactions that are very much reasonable as well as exiting. The unique premise of the story throws a small odd ball, which creates a very unique plot that keeps you guessing what will happen, not going to lie, plot managed to trip me up a few times by subverting my expectations in a way that makes sense. The suspense which is created from the outside world and the dungeon core interacting is very fun to read. But to be frank, my number 1 point would be that it appears to follow a very “emotionless” (By human standards) *and* fun to read about MC, which doesn&rsquo;t appear to be heading to the cheesy redemption MC thingy that plagues a lot of story&rsquo;s. Overall, a great novel I recommend you read.</p>

Shiro-kyo
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This is peak comedy. Truly a shiny story. I hope the story continues in this manner. Hugh Man!

Giulio Cimmino
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one of my favorite fiction on rayalroad,the only negative thing is that Is a little bit slow on publishing and the chapters are too short maybe if you do chapter a little bit longer is better because you can enter in the history better than more sort cp 

CBase
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Dungeon Core meets Lovecraft

Reviewed at: Chapter 12

Reading this story feels like reading the bible of a cultist added with some system stats.