Feral - Evil is a matter of perspective

by Nole Moody

Original COMPLETED Action Adventure Fantasy GameLit High Fantasy LitRPG Magic Virtual Reality
Warning This fiction contains:
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When the hero is a Goblin scrambling for survival in a brutal world, what is good might not be as clear cut as you expect.

"If you think you’re too small to make a difference, you haven’t spent a night with a mosquito."

— Goblin Proverbs of Caution and Cowardice.

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RAAN
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At the beginning of the story, I thought that this will be simply another RPG goblin-playing story but I'm pleasantly surprised that this story presents itself with so much potential. While some parts may look like cliche others are original and refreshing ( feral ). It certainly brings out the most stereotypical conceptions about right and wrong, whishing to protect something and whishing to be cruel. To sum it up I recommend this story if you can look past the "Golden Paladin" kind of image.

chaogoesmu
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Surprisingly good for being evil

Reviewed at: 29. Rabble Rousing

I wasnt expecting much but its 3 in the morning and I couldn't put it down once I started. Certain aspects made me roll my eyes but I immediately forgot about that minutes later as the story rolled it back in smoothly and added depth. Read this.

WolfLordMaster
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I, too, have been bullied into making this review :D

So far its been pretty good! But being too lazy to write a good review, Ima just say that I aprove of the wolf runt :) awoooOOO

Pez
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The RPG system seems pretty well fleshed out, and I'm enjoying the story.  There have been only a small number of grammar issues (as of chapter 25), and I think I only really noticed one of them.

My only criticism is that some of these chapters are far too short.

Nomad1791
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Iv been reading it all day. Not a lot of chapters yet but it's well written and characters are likeable. Hope to see more good luck author. 👍

Tealc
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The Author has bullied me into writing this review but I shall attempt to give it my best shot!

The system in use in this story is quite amazing, well thought out and I've seen the author give immediate answers to why things are how they are. I wish people would actually take the time to read these because it's quite easy to understand once you do.
The intro was a little bit weird, but funny and interesting none the less. Rush is a great character, and really emphasizes the fact that not every great main character has to be a superhumanly good person. I can personally empathize with Rush's mentality towards survival and staying out of trouble, he's really likable if you can get into his mindset.

The overall story has been really good so far and it's great to see such diversity in stories like having the protag be a goblin of all species. All around, good story, characters, and plot!

Reindall
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Interesting take on a vmmo, with a nice twist concerning the mc. the story so far (read up to chapter 19 currently) is rather fast paced and interesting. 

Its is well written and an easy read, with just some little hiccups that might interrupt the reading flow (like bleeding spiders and sometimes weird comma)

All in all i like the story and am curious to where it will go.

Bored monster
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We here have a Game lit rpg style novel. A story about an abandoned child turned goblin with a doctor over seeing the experiment. The story has shown an insighful and meaningful depth into poverty and surviving at any means necessary.

The very accurate and sad truth about people not believing you when inconvenient for them is just the cherry on top.

kjoatmon
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Everything is Evil

Reviewed at: 22. Rescue

The system sees basically all acts as evil, even selfe defense and killing an evil person while definding yourself. So you can never be anything other than evil and get penalized for being evil. This is also supposed to somehow help people psycologically in their real life so telling people thay are nothing but evil helps them? Lots of prolems there.

DrAlt
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Evil characters are not very sympathetic

Reviewed at: 13. Crime and punishment

Fairly interesting angle on mental health therapy by virtual roleplaying.  Chapters are super-short and perspectives vary, which I don't really enjoy.  It was hard for me to get into the story as I found the MC about as likable as a wounded honey badger.  That may be the point.  If you enjoy the anti-social quirky self-absorbed protagonist, you'll love this story.