Feral - Evil is a matter of perspective

by Nole Moody

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy High Fantasy LitRPG Magic
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

When the hero is a Goblin scrambling for survival in a brutal situation, what is good might not be as clear cut as you expect.

If you think you’re too small to make a difference, you haven’t spent a night with a mosquito

— Goblin Proverbs of Caution and Cowardice.

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Pez
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The RPG system seems pretty well fleshed out, and I'm enjoying the story.  There have been only a small number of grammar issues (as of chapter 25), and I think I only really noticed one of them.

My only criticism is that some of these chapters are far too short.

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Interesting take on a vmmo, with a nice twist concerning the mc. the story so far (read up to chapter 19 currently) is rather fast paced and interesting. 

Its is well written and an easy read, with just some little hiccups that might interrupt the reading flow (like bleeding spiders and sometimes weird comma)

All in all i like the story and am curious to where it will go.