Dawn Weaver - a tale of Dragon Riders

by mogust

Original ONGOING Fantasy Sci-fi Female Lead Gender Bender High Fantasy Magic Multiple Lead Characters
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An ancient evil stirs in the kingdom of Avaraline, and the fate of all life in a world blessed by magic hangs in the balance. The Guilds and Clans, who hold the power of the lands, are ill equipped to deal with the unknown threat, with corruption spreading through their ranks.

 

Not that this is of any consequence to Izen, a young man struggling to survive in a dying village, and Myne, a talented young Dragon rider seeking to prove herself. That is until the infamous Witch is sensed near his village and Izen becomes intertwined in world of the Dragon riders. Literally, with the magic awakening in him too. The complication, is that only females can be riders.

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Decent writing, not my cup of tea

Reviewed at: Chapter 2 - First Steps (Part 1)

Gender Bender.
Expected the male lead to become an exception to the in-universe rules, got a gender bender. Probably my fault for having expectations.

Writing is decent enough, could use a bit of editing in the shape of certain paragraphs being too long and too much description on certain things that don't need describing.

First chapter has a weird tendency to put certain words & terms mentioned for the first time in italics.

Give it try if you don't mind about a gender bending MC.