America in Another World

by RonTheBlackCat

Original ONGOING Fantasy High Fantasy Magic Multiple Lead Characters Portal Fantasy / Isekai Supernatural War and Military
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One day in 2019, the United States of America finds itself transported to a new world.

What will happen if a modern superpower from Earth finds itself in a world with magic and technology ranging from the medieval era to World War 1? F-22 Raptors vs wyverns and biplanes. Arleigh Burke-class destroyers vs wooden ships, mage ships, and dreadnaughts. M4 carbines vs bow n’ arrows, staffs, and bolt-action rifles. Featuring aggressive expansionist empires and magical kingdoms, what will the United States do?

P.S. I will do weekly updates every Sunday of chapters with about 1000-2000 words each.

P.P.S. Cover art is not mine.

P.P.P.S. Maomi (A friend of mine and no her actual name is not Maomi) is my editor and future cover artist. Say thanks to her for being involved with this!

P.P.P.P.S At this point, there’s too much ps, but one last thing. This is my first novel and I’m pretty sure I’m not a good writer, so this is like a “practice” novel with one of my less good story ideas (Don’t worry I take this seriously and plan to finish it).

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1 - The Satellites Aren’t Broken ago
Author's Ramblings/Satellite Image of the New World ago
Chapter 2 - The Civvies, the Military... and the Birds? ago
New World Info ago
Chapter 3 - Uncharted Territory ago
Chapter 4 - First Contact ago
Chapter 5 - New Knowledge ago
Chapter 6 - The Imperiums ago
Chapter 7 - Become Our Vassal State ago
President Character Poll ago
Chapter 8 - It Has Begun ago
Chapter 9 Part 1 - One Sided Naval Battle ago
Chapter 9 Part 2 - One Sided Naval Battle ago
Chapter 10 - Calm Before the Storm ago
Chapter 11 - Preparations ago
Chapter 12 - Beginning of the End of the Mach Imperium ago
Chapter 13 - Invasion of the Bem ago
Chapter 14 - Aginport Secured ago
Chapter 15 - Mach... you're next! ago
Chapter 16 - Diving Eagle ago
Chapter 17 - Death From Above ago
Chapter 18 - The Eagle Has Landed ago
Chapter 19 - The Army Goes Rolling Along ago
Chapter 20 - Battle of the Eastern Plains ago
Chapter 21 - To The Capital! ago
Chapter 22 - End Of An Imperium ago
Chapter 23 Part 1 - New Threats? ago
Chapter 23 Part 2 - New Threats? ago
Chapter 24 Part 1 - Blitzkrieg ago
Chapter 24 Part 2 - Blitzkrieg ago
Chapter 25 - The Storm Has Arrived ago
Chapter 26 - War Crimes ago
Chapter 27 - The 300 ago
Chapter 28 - Lions Led by Donkeys ago
Chapter 29 - Last Stand ago
Elven Interlude ago
Chapter 30 - The Situation At Sea ago
Chapter 31 - Bait Operation ago
Chapter 32 - PMC ago
Chapter 33 - Over There, Over There! ago
Chapter 34 - "The Black Death" Helicopter ago
Chapter 35 - Turning Point ago
Chapter 36 - Elven Concern ago
Chapter 37 - Jungle's Drift ago
Chapter 38 - Time To Strike ago

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Filipzajac
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Nice grammar. Easy to read.  Will reccomend. Keep up the good work.  Looks like it was based on the japan in another world story, but the only similar thing is the concept. (so far) 

Wise old penguin
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Trump would've made this a comedy

Reviewed at: President Character Poll

This story is a different take on the "Japan summoned into another world" genre, where it's the USA instead.

The author is clearly from the US, since he has a good grasp of what would actually happen in such a silly situation.

A notable style choice that the author made is to change the color of the text for different people/nationalities, I dunno if that's a better idea than using conventional writing.

The president of the US is probably the most notable character and I'm kinda sad that the author didn't use Trump, but I guess that would turn this into a comedy and I feel like it could blow up in the authors face. Just imagine instead of the president POW we just get a tweet a la "Redacted is trying to turn our great nation into a vassal. GREAT mistake. Sad." Then the POW could be given to a normal person instead.

I think the author is still in the worldbuilding stage for this world and he'll start introducing actual characters later, at least I hope so.

Nanolyte
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This story may be new but it's very promising so far. The premise is also quite unique (ik Ur basing it on summoning japan) but it's still unique. The chapters have decent length and grammar (something that is surprisingly rare). 

 

Keep up the good work! 😀

Conrad Pat
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Read the whole thing and made an account just so I can give a review.  Overall, this story is an enjoyable and good read.  Some of the grammar and wording could use some minor improvements to make some sentences and scenes less awkward to read.  Definitely reccomend to other readers who are interested in this type of genre.  Would like to know more about civilian life in the US as things in the story progress, as well as in other countries of interest.  Definitely liked the portion of the story where life in the Machian Empire for it's citizens has changed due to the war, and would definitely wish to see much more of that in the future.  

Going Nowhere
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Thinking about how modern day America would react to being isekai'ed gave me great joy. Im interested in seeing where the story will go next!

kao
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If you've read 1632 by Eric Flint and see some parrallels you're not too far off. 

I loved the 1632 series. The idea of plopping a 21st Century Town into the wars of 1632 Europe and then having the tech and society of 21st impact and cause butterfly effects around the world was and is still a great read. 

However...The idea of moving a WHOLE nation...now that's a different beast all together. 

I'm gonna give the writer 5 stars because they're attempting to write something I've thought about, but didn't do because I was paralyzed by the humongous complexity of impacting a less advanced world by the introduction of a SUPREMELY complex country like the US of A. 

So if you want to give this a read, and are intrigued by the similarity between it and 1632 of Eric Flint...you should. It will at least show you the coolness and yet not so cool ways of mixing a modern country and a supremely low tech society. 

To the Undiscovered Country!! 

Imperious Republic will be born! 

Hail Imperious Republic!

HamsterDesTodes
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I started to read this story about three month ago when it hit trending. Wasn't too impressed, the fact that WW I era and even Napoleonic war era people can't recognize that a modern society is more advanced than they seemed rather strange to me.
To them, a Ford T seemingly looks exactly the same as a modern car, skyscrapers are unremarkable and nuclear-powered carriers are no bigger than coal-powered battleships! (although to be honest, the bigger empires could be in the conversion-to-oil phase already)

But it was early days yet, so I gave it 3 stars and decided to wait and see and continue reading once a few more chapters ran up (and the war that was looming came to fruit).

Unfortunately nothing much changed, except that now we can add the feeling of watching a boxing match between an MMA pro and a toddler to the general awkwardness of the story.
Yes, the US armed forces are capable of beating a fleet of sailing ships and after that several fleets of "only" 100-year-old ships and their respective armies. Why the author found it necessary to spend a dozen chapters on this incredible unremarkable feat is entirely beyond me.
I'm still waiting on fighting magical creatures as the cover pic promised! Where's my dragon? Perhaps a summoned, magic throwing hero, a bunch of elves with arrows punching through tanks and dwarves tough enough to withstand an artillery salvo. Fantastical monsters and how to slay them? Above all, WHERE IS THE TENSION?

At least there are few typos and the flow of the tale improved as the writing goes on. Extra star for that. We also seem to have an actual character to follow, even if he's on the wrong side of the power-divide. Still, not my kind of story. (yet?)

THaD1US
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So far I like this novel keep up the good work dude

jager
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Ok I literly think of this some times when I get board. I am glad I am not the only one!

Neko Musume
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Keep it up !!

The story is great , looking forward to the battlefield,

But the prez were too layz .. but its fun !!!

Hope the series will kept goin on !!

 

At first i tought that it will be the same like summon japan

but after reading it till the latest release it were different !!

Also i hope theres more of the different pov ...