America in Another World

by RonTheBlackCat

Original ONGOING Fantasy High Fantasy Magic Multiple Lead Characters Portal Fantasy / Isekai Supernatural War and Military
Warning This fiction contains:
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One day in 2019, the United States of America finds itself transported to a new world.

What will happen if a modern superpower from Earth finds itself in a world with magic and technology ranging from the medieval era to World War 1? F-22 Raptors vs wyverns and biplanes. Arleigh Burke-class destroyers vs wooden ships, mage ships, and dreadnaughts. M4 carbines vs bow n’ arrows, staffs, and bolt-action rifles. Featuring aggressive expansionist empires and magical kingdoms, what will the United States do?

P.S. I will do weekly updates every Sunday of chapters with about 1000-2000 words each.

P.P.S. Cover art is not mine.

P.P.P.S. Maomi (A friend of mine and no her actual name is not Maomi) is my editor and future cover artist. Say thanks to her for being involved with this!

P.P.P.P.S At this point, there’s too much ps, but one last thing. This is my first novel and I’m pretty sure I’m not a good writer, so this is like a “practice” novel with one of my less good story ideas (Don’t worry I take this seriously and plan to finish it).

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Filipzajac
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Nice grammar. Easy to read.  Will reccomend. Keep up the good work.  Looks like it was based on the japan in another world story, but the only similar thing is the concept. (so far) 

Nanolyte
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This story may be new but it's very promising so far. The premise is also quite unique (ik Ur basing it on summoning japan) but it's still unique. The chapters have decent length and grammar (something that is surprisingly rare). 

 

Keep up the good work! 😀

Going Nowhere
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Thinking about how modern day America would react to being isekai'ed gave me great joy. Im interested in seeing where the story will go next!

Wise old penguin
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Trump would've made this a comedy

Reviewed at: President Character Poll

This story is a different take on the "Japan summoned into another world" genre, where it's the USA instead.

The author is clearly from the US, since he has a good grasp of what would actually happen in such a silly situation.

A notable style choice that the author made is to change the color of the text for different people/nationalities, I dunno if that's a better idea than using conventional writing.

The president of the US is probably the most notable character and I'm kinda sad that the author didn't use Trump, but I guess that would turn this into a comedy and I feel like it could blow up in the authors face. Just imagine instead of the president POW we just get a tweet a la "Redacted is trying to turn our great nation into a vassal. GREAT mistake. Sad." Then the POW could be given to a normal person instead.

I think the author is still in the worldbuilding stage for this world and he'll start introducing actual characters later, at least I hope so.