Original COMPLETED Fantasy Short Story Magic Male Lead

Once upon a time, there was a great glassmaker whose creations shine and sparkle like no other. Other great glassmakers grew jealous over his artistic fruit and decide to infiltrate his workshop to uncover his secrets.

Sincerely,
The Storyteller

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I don't normally read short stories and I found this through the 'surprise me' search. 

I can say I'm glad I did, as this is a good story. I think it's a bit rough with the telling, confusing with the jealous men as they are never named, but it feels elegant in it's simplicity of what can happen in life.