Arrogant Young Master Template A Variation 4

Arrogant Young Master Template A Variation 4

by LivingSpoon

What would a Xianxia MC do?

Seriously, what would they do? Asking for a friend.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
1. Transmigration ago
2. Disciple Acceptance Ceremony ago
3. Calamity ago
4. Not a Dream, Sorry ago
5. Tragedy of the Heroine ago
6. Archives Must Be Incomplete ago
7. Prepared ago
8. Gather for the Feast ago
9. Wolves' Hunger ago
10. Low Profile ago
11. Heroine Goes to Work ago
12. Like Father, Like Son ago
13. Anti-MC Thug Force ago
14. She Just Kept Talking... ago
15. Blockade ago
16. I Have Finished Farming ago
17. No Fun Allowed ago
18. A Father's Love ago
19. Endless Suffering ago
20. Power of Friendship ago
21. Tragic Past ago
22. Doubt ago
23. Magnet ago
24. Mistakes Were Made ago
25. Convergence ago
26. Old Friends Die Hard ago
27. Crystalized Effort ago
28. Not Slow Enough ago
29. Overreaction? ago
30. Devil ago
31. No Matter the Cost ago
32. Hurricane Arrives ago
33. Why So Reasonable? ago
34. Just Deserts ago
35. Anomalies ago
36. Expectation ago
37. Interference ago
38. Family First ago
39. Death Omen ago
40. Loophole ago
41. Traditional Gift ago
42. Ice Fishing ago
43. Anger Management ago
44. Uncontested Farming ago
45. King of Vegetables ago
46. Top Dog ago
47. Pampered Princess ago
48. An Object in Motion ago
49. Natural Order ago
50. Way of the Cockroach ago
51. They're Always Watching ago
52. Herbology Professor ago
53. Tampering ago
54. Reserve Force ago
55. The Tyrant ago
56. Fiercely Filial ago
57. Over the Specified Limits ago
58. Anti-Divination Alliance ago
59. No Need to Delay ago
60. Pro-Divination Alliance ago
61. Future Concubine ago
62. It isn't Cheating ago
63. Heartwarming Advice ago
64. Ancient Plan ago
65. Cost of Exposure ago
66. Natural Habitat ago
67. The Chicken or the Egg? ago
68. First Contact ago
69. Bursting Watermelon ago
70. Like Mother, Like Son ago
71. Nerd Rage ago
72. Hat Trick ago
73. Special Delivery ago
74. Senpai ago
75. Always Respectful ago
76. Quite Dangerous ago
77. Little Fish ago
78. Familiar Structure ago
79. SYS-UMS-3516961 ago
80. Long Ai ago
81. Carrot All the Way ago
82. Unfulfilled Wish ago
83. The Survivor ago
84. Going Against Fate ago
85. Old Habits Die Hard ago
86. Can't Follow the Rabbit ago
87. Harbinger of Doom ago
88. Priorities ago
89. Just Like the Simulations ago
90. Prank Call ago
91. Anti-Harem Alliance ago
92. Reverse-Harem Alliance ago
93. Totally Not an Array Master ago
94. Three Weirdos ago
95. Exhausting ago
96. True Long ago
97. Predesigned ago
98. Status Upgrade ago
99. Grandmaster Delusions ago
100. Aesthetically Incomplete ago
101. Captain Proton ago
102. Dark Flame Master ago
103. Harem Protagonists Must Die ago
104. Trek Through the Stars ago
105. Local Cuisine ago
106. Unaware of the Elder Behind ago
107. Transmigrator Support Group ago
108. Hot Rainbow ago
109. Two Fatal Mistakes ago
110. Shattered Hopes ago
111. Swan Wants to Eat Toad Meat ago
112. Series of Unfortunate Mistakes ago
113. Truth Seer ago
114. Gratitude Farmer ago
115. Death by Snu Snu ago
116. Sacrificial Lamb ago
117. Ancient Measures ago
118. The Truth of This World ago
119. Slumbering Splinter ago
120. Second Hand Mistakes ago
121. History Repeating Itself ago
122. Crazy Parents ago
123. Reunion ago
124. Excessive Halo ago
125. Beyond Terrified ago
126. First Accident ago
127. Candy Giving Stranger ago
128. Shalalala ago
129. Many Meetings ago
130. Irreversible Corruption ago
131. Sweet Whispers ago
132. Father Knows Best ago
133. Monster Receives Permission ago
134. Dao of Money ago
135. Still Not Quite ago
136. Old Frenemies ago
137. Benefits ago
138. [Remaining: 2] ago
139. Professional Courtesy ago
140. Primordial Oblivion Bloodline ago
141. Will to Destroy ago
142. Bringer of Hope ago
143. Unreliable Help ago
144. White Moonlight ago
145. All About Mechanics ago
146. Self-Realization ago
147. Resurgence ago

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Manh Cuong
Overall

Ok, this novel should be on your top to read list on RR. funny , new perspective from the story , you being the master of the MC and trying to survive, absolutely compelling.

Give it a try, you wont be dissapoint.

And of course my review isn't 50 word ling, lol 

MoonlitSky7
Overall

Easily equal to Villain Wants to Live. The comedy at the start was top notch. Story wasnt the best but the plot twists were handled pretty well so not much complaints there. Characters are decent, none made me gag from anger/frustations like the ones from beware of chicken. Romance was meh,not really the focus of the story, definitely doesnt compare with Martial arts master from the writter of Lord of the mysteries but atleast it isnt annoying like most. Great fkn novel dawg

UnknownOrc
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Good Satire of Xianxia, pop culture references, and puns. Good worldbuilding. No complex characters so far because it's not a serious story, just read to enjoy and share with others to let them enjoy.

However, it's all a mask, it's a lure, it will suck you in its light-hearted theme but it has layers of heavy misunderstanding of MC with his Xianxia novels knowledge and System powers on real Xianxia world rules and other factors.

You will stay with this story because of MC's constant satire of Xianxia tropes but his life hanging in balance if others find out he is not the real but different soul in someone else body.

Other characters are also Xianxia tropes based or somewhat similar and overly calculative kinda like MC but still have enough traits to differ from MC. You will only read this story for MC only not for other characters which I am sure of it.

It's a System-Story and the plot is beyond Galatic level and involves System origin and cosmic level shit tangled between System powers.

But, we are here for this same kind of story if we know how this is going to play out. So enjoy and bring others too. This story is a celebration, a Party! Enjoy! CHEERS!

(Oct 2021) - Auther came back after 2 years of covid hiatus and gifted us 70+ chapters like a Santa. We all thought he was lost in Covid, I can't be happier to see him back with Bang!

Gerald
Overall

I dunno y the rating so high... All I can say is...ANNOYING... the more I read the more it irritate the readers...

Well, atleast its all good at start... 

Nomad1791
Overall

Let me say this story is a joke on stories I don't normally like but at the same time sticking to those same themes to make fun of them. Oddly it's very enjoyable 😂 kinda like beware of chicken in the making fun of op Chinese MCs who defy heaven and earth. Story is well written characters are easy to like and understand, world building is constant and well done Grammer is easy to read with few to no mistakes. I was actually sad when I got to the most up to date chapter.

AlternateReality
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Good with potential to be great

Reviewed at: 147. Resurgence

This is an entertaining story that I would recommend to anyone who has read Xianxia and is familiar with the genre's tropes. The humor is consistent throughout the story and the story doesn't try to take itself too seriously.

Their are a few gripes I have however. The first with his romantic life, of which there is nothing. An "arrogant" young master would have a different woman in his bed every night. Now, it doesn't exactly fit the character of the man the MC took his body over, but the MC is still male with hormones where I assume he wasn't celiabate. Seriously, I he doesn't even need a Dao companion or a wife or whatever, but his complete aversion slightly dampens the story. 

(Now at one point he did have thoughts go to a brothel in the mortal world, didn't act on them.) 

The second gripe I have with the story is the confusing morality of the MC. He'll have no problem extinguishing a person's soul at one point, but then worry about killing at another? No problem having subordinates doing it but suddenly feels it is wrong if he does? Some consistency would be nice. He doesn't need to be a ruthless MC but I feel as if these problems should have been sorted out early on (especially with his new mother and her family.) 

The third gripe is the lack of world building. It is honestly difficult to understand all these different realms and how they relate to one another, the history of said realms, what netherworld demons are, how netherworld demons are related to void beings, and how you rank higher beings. It feels very hapazardly put together rather than having a cohesive structure. Not that you have to spell everything out to the reader the first time something is mentioned, but dropping hints throughout different 'arcs' could help. 

The final gripe isn't with the story but with the inconsistent uploads. It's hard to build up a dedicated fanbase and have weekly readers without a consistent schedule. Something like 2 chapters a week would be much appreciated instead of potentially waiting 6 months for 50 chapters. 

 

Overall, I do like the concept, I just find a few tweaks could turn a good story into a great one. 

(Also, concerning the most recent author's note, the lack of new MCs for the MC to nuture and how you plan for this to have 300 or so chapters is a bit offputting. I honestly think if in the future you do a serious rewrite, pace things out more, and add some more sophisticated humor (keeping the generic trope humor), a bit more serious tone at times, more MCs that he picks up in different worlds, etc this could be a genuine gem and become something that could make a bit of money for you.)