Arrogant Young Master Template A Variation 4

by LivingSpoon

Original ONGOING Adventure Comedy Fantasy LitRPG Male Lead Martial Arts Ruling Class Slice of Life Xianxia

What would a Xianxia MC do?

Seriously, what would they do? Asking for a friend.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
1. Transmigration ago
2. Disciple Acceptance Ceremony ago
3. Calamity ago
4. Not a Dream, Sorry ago
5. Tragedy of the Heroine ago
6. Archives Must Be Incomplete ago
7. Prepared ago
8. Gather for the Feast ago
9. Wolves' Hunger ago
10. Low Profile ago
11. Heroine Goes to Work ago
12. Like Father, Like Son ago
13. Anti-MC Thug Force ago
14. She Just Kept Talking... ago
15. Blockade ago
16. I Have Finished Farming ago
17. No Fun Allowed ago
18. A Father's Love ago
19. Endless Suffering ago
20. Power of Friendship ago
21. Tragic Past ago
22. Doubt ago
23. Magnet ago
24. Mistakes Were Made ago
25. Convergence ago
26. Old Friends Die Hard ago
27. Crystalized Effort ago
28. Not Slow Enough ago
29. Overreaction? ago
30. Devil ago
31. No Matter the Cost ago
32. Hurricane Arrives ago
33. Why So Reasonable? ago
34. Just Deserts ago
35. Anomalies ago
36. Expectation ago
37. Interference ago
38. Family First ago
39. Death Omen ago
40. Loophole ago
41. Traditional Gift ago
42. Ice Fishing ago
43. Anger Management ago
44. Uncontested Farming ago
45. King of Vegetables ago
46. Top Dog ago
47. Pampered Princess ago
48. An Object in Motion ago
49. Natural Order ago
50. Way of the Cockroach ago
51. They're Always Watching ago
52. Herbology Professor ago
53. Tampering ago
54. Reserve Force ago
55. The Tyrant ago
56. Fiercely Filial ago
57. Over the Specified Limits ago
58. Anti-Divination Alliance ago
59. No Need to Delay ago
60. Pro-Divination Alliance ago
61. Future Concubine ago
62. It isn't Cheating ago
63. Heartwarming Advice ago
64. Ancient Plan ago
65. Cost of Exposure ago
66. Natural Habitat ago
67. The Chicken or the Egg? ago
68. First Contact ago

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Raz
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I genuinely enjoy this book. It not often that a story is able to pull me in enough to actually feel giddy when something cool happens. 

STYLE: This book is a comedy, and it is pretty much satire; despite this the quality of the writing is supurb and the meta parts even manage to somehow make it more immersive.

GRAMMER: I noticed neither spelling errors nor errors in sentence structure.

STORY:It's a more interesting xianxia than most actual xianxia. The story remains in pretty much one place, or at least one world, so far. The characters aren't constantly being replaced and its possible to easily grasp what's going on. It's relaxed enough to enjoy but with just enough tension on the MCs part to make me want to keep reading. Additionally although it is technically an Xiania the Mc doesn't obsess about personal power, and starts with more wealth than most of the planets population. Together this means he doesn't sit around "growing" but is instead out and about misinterpreting others and doing plot stuff. 

CHARACTER: The Mc is probably the best part of the story. He does bumble around with most of his actions having unforceen consequences, and may be a bit dense, but he's intelligent enough that his decisions are understandable and even relatable even when they often look strange from other characters perspectives. Lots of stories in the same vein are unreadable simply due to having a mc who's decisions are unintelligible.

OVERALL:10/10 would read again. Thanks for brightening my day with this amazing story!

Jangofet54
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An interesting direction to take in a Xianxia/Wuxia novel. Really refreshing and well made. From what I can tell the author regularly updates the novel and this has the potential to be a stable in my favorites collection. 

Give it a go.

sarbification
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It's a realy good and funny story.

Reviewed at: 1. Transmigration

I realy like it very much. Start was bad, this so 'chines' start that i wanted stoped right now, but when i read further I really enjoyed.     It's sometimes funny due to MC and his struggles with cultivation world. The story will start be intresting and funny when he take his disciple, it about at 8 chapter. Try it, i think you will not to regret.

hakatri gin
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Great by itself, even better if you are tired of xianxia clichés

Reviewed at: 35. Anomalies

A xianxia story with no MC fights, this forces the plot to advance in imaginative ways and to strenghten his connection to his environment

The way the MC bullshits his way to success is awesome and as a genre-savy character he keeps track of his actions to not repeat himself, which keeps the story fresh

One of the works that are made just for fun and become a top example of fun

humblepeasant
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It's a more interesting xianxia than most actual xianxia.

Zed_Oud
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great xianxia-demolishing Rational Fiction

Reviewed at: 53. Tampering

Read up to chapter 53

I've read a lot of Xianxia, I've burnt a lot of stones/coins on Qidian/Webnovels. 

This is some good trope-crushing stuff.

For fans of Rational Fiction, you will get a contact high from this.

 

Hidden in the Grass
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Impossibly good, a dense read that doesn't waste time on useless fluff, every chapter seems intent in its goal, and well executed, leaving the reader satisfied. Very much a 9.7/10. The only reason it isn't a 10/10 is because it isn't a Brandon Sanderson or a Patrick Rothfuss, and thus cannot be perfect, but other than that, it leaves me completely satisfied. 

Jurak Lucais
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truly, if you’re looking for something to read that will rock your boat of any previous expectations, you’d have long sunk since reading this. It has the cheeky kind of humour that You, yes You, will love.

I do admit that some things took away from my enjoyment of it and reduced my near laughing out loud to mere chuckles. The fact is that the author very quickly escalates the size of the plot. Too fast for the reader to properly take in and it also threatens, as well as has a bit, to make previous parts of what the author has written to have to be dismissed to take in what is currently going on. A true pity.

i like it a lot already and can’t help but get high hopes and become happy myself when the author said how much he is enjoying writing it. That can only mean more chapters and whatever happens, I’ll love to see how he’ll bring this new concept further.

telp
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A nice change from other novels

Reviewed at: 35. Anomalies

This cultivation story is very funny. A lot of situations are hilarious. It takes cultivation elements from classic novels but makes it funny. The grammar is correct. I hope the story will continue in the same direction. So give it a try.

Yay
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I haven't read a wuxia system novel in a while

Reviewed at: 34. Just Deserts

First of all my English is not native so I apologize in advance for the inevitable mistakes I will make next. HAHAHA I really enjoyed this novel, as I said in the title above a long time ago that I never read a cultivation novel, mainly system and you got the essence of it. I highly recommend it to anyone reading wuxias novels as this is really good I laughed out loud here.