Arrogant Young Master Template A Variation 4

by LivingSpoon

Original ONGOING Adventure Comedy Fantasy LitRPG Male Lead Martial Arts Ruling Class Slice of Life Xianxia

What would a Xianxia MC do?

Seriously, what would they do? Asking for a friend.

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sandro530
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Awesome, funny and something new (in an exciting way)

Reviewed at: 38. Family First
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It's a fantastic story well weiteren with good charakters and a funny MC It's even better than the simulacrum! Can't wait for more!

DressedUpToParty
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Slakes the cultivation thirst

Reviewed at: 38. Family First

The best subversion of the xianxia/wuxia story type that I've ever read. So good, in fact, that it probably beats out the better straight xianxia stories just in terms of how enjoyable it is to read. My only real nitpicks are that the releases are slightly irregular, but honestly, that's not even a real downside.

Kuro_Usagi
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Two words. Blown. Away. 

It might be the late night magic talking, but I was shocked in such a pleasant way about how well the stoty felt to me. I've read many many chinese webnovels and this was like a breath of fresh air.

It's has such an interesting mix of xianxia tropes but it's coupled with a dose of trope-wary mc who knows the plotlines of xianxia stories. 

It's simply amazing how it's done and I know that I'll be eagerly awaiting every chapter for hopefully many moons to come.

claws8367
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Most interesting xianxia paradoy i have ever read. If i had to describe it, it would the 3 times beter version of of old novel i read..

telp
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A nice change from other novels

Reviewed at: 35. Anomalies

This cultivation story is very funny. A lot of situations are hilarious. It takes cultivation elements from classic novels but makes it funny. The grammar is correct. I hope the story will continue in the same direction. So give it a try.

mrtats
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Xianxia Template E Variation 2

Reviewed at: 38. Family First

Just plain fun, I always chuckle when reading this story and I hope you, the prospective reader would also enjoy this story as much as I do.

Style: It is not an average Xianxia novel, I could tell you that. Expect a lot of tropes being used as a subterfuge. 

Story: What can I say it is fun and a fresh breath into the xianxia genre.

Grammar: Minor grammar mistakes considering the author is not from an English speaking country.

Character: There are of course some minor complications with some side characters but that doesn't take away from the story.

Enjoy 

Raz
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I genuinely enjoy this book. It not often that a story is able to pull me in enough to actually feel giddy when something cool happens. 

STYLE: This book is a comedy, and it is pretty much satire; despite this the quality of the writing is supurb and the meta parts even manage to somehow make it more immersive.

GRAMMER: I noticed neither spelling errors nor errors in sentence structure.

STORY:It's a more interesting xianxia than most actual xianxia. The story remains in pretty much one place, or at least one world, so far. The characters aren't constantly being replaced and its possible to easily grasp what's going on. It's relaxed enough to enjoy but with just enough tension on the MCs part to make me want to keep reading. Additionally although it is technically an Xiania the Mc doesn't obsess about personal power, and starts with more wealth than most of the planets population. Together this means he doesn't sit around "growing" but is instead out and about misinterpreting others and doing plot stuff. 

CHARACTER: The Mc is probably the best part of the story. He does bumble around with most of his actions having unforceen consequences, and may be a bit dense, but he's intelligent enough that his decisions are understandable and even relatable even when they often look strange from other characters perspectives. Lots of stories in the same vein are unreadable simply due to having a mc who's decisions are unintelligible.

OVERALL:10/10 would read again. Thanks for brightening my day with this amazing story!

Yay
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I haven't read a wuxia system novel in a while

Reviewed at: 34. Just Deserts

First of all my English is not native so I apologize in advance for the inevitable mistakes I will make next. HAHAHA I really enjoyed this novel, as I said in the title above a long time ago that I never read a cultivation novel, mainly system and you got the essence of it. I highly recommend it to anyone reading wuxias novels as this is really good I laughed out loud here.

sarbification
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It's a realy good and funny story.

Reviewed at: 1. Transmigration

I realy like it very much. Start was bad, this so 'chines' start that i wanted stoped right now, but when i read further I really enjoyed.     It's sometimes funny due to MC and his struggles with cultivation world. The story will start be intresting and funny when he take his disciple, it about at 8 chapter. Try it, i think you will not to regret.

CatVI
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Read title. It is good.

MC is likable. And he actually uses all resources available to him.

But some plot holes. They are ignorable though.

Like, 

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