Cutest in the Omniverse

by BubbleGum

MC: So I can choose anything within my allocated points and imagination?

???: Yes, from Almighty Systems to Evolving Weaponry, to Dominating Cultivation Techniques, anything you desire. 

MC: Then, make me the cutest! The cutest in the Omniverse!

???: ...

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Andrew Robinson
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10 chapters about a birthday party, where most people appear to be okay that the aunt just gave the family a senient AI that;

  1. may go nuts and also
  2. needs constant attention and support to avoid it going nuts.

Also did I say that it was 10 chapters about a birthday party....


Will probably give it another go in a while and see if the story starts going anywhere.

Deaconsyre
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The MC may be cute but the story is beautiful

Reviewed at: Preschool Arc II : Cutely Knocking on the Door

While I admit that the story is quite saccharine I do enjoy it. I find that the somewhat wry perspective of the MC adds enough spice to the recipe to finish the "sweet and spice and everything nice" combo that a proper cutest in the Omniverse must adhere to.

In technical respects the writing is good but not perfect. So, typos are expected but few and don't usually impede the understanding of the content.

Bizmatech
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It's silly stupid fun that manages to avoid falling into the "lol so random" category.

Some of it drags on a bit longer than it needs to, but the Author's release rate is fast enough to balance out the pace.

The grammar is fairly good, with the only problem being unnecessay word repetition in a couplle sentences here and there.

I'll probably be coming back for more of this one.

Yuezu
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Great novel but a tiny bit on the slow side

Reviewed at: Toddler Arc IV : Cute Robotic Doll

The style is quite good considering the great amount of novels on this site, and the same can be said about the grammar.

The characters are really well developed, you can even imagine easily the events happening while reading the novel.

All in all this is a great novel.

ZekromZZ
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Not great but a light hearted read if your bored.

Reviewed at: Toddler Arc III : Cutely Playing Charades!

Seems to be a slow slice of life. It's pretty good.

MogunComet
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To be honest, just look around
Sex is like in every royalroadl story now
Theme is always dark and murky
or MC is cunning and stuff

All of the good plot in anime and manga right now is very phisolophical, tends to be serious and thought provoking, but that can take a toll.

What we need to do PRAISE THE CUTENESS

Overall just lightherted cutesy story that you enjoy while prep yourself for another hard read. It's kinda similar how you would take time to rest at a bonfire in Dark Souls before going out there again, knowing full well that you gonna die.

Now praise Astraea or I gonna knock up your door with some Adepta Sororitas.

Odysseus
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I guess the reason I don't really like this is because of it's kind of clinical and emotionless way of approaching "cuteness." I don't like how the story discusses in depth about the different kinds of cuteness, like "behavioral cuteness" and such, the main character also strikes me as kinda a creep, tho thats might just be me... It's a major put-off in this story how he tries to manipulate his parents, seeming not to care about anything except how his abilities are developing. I doubt thats the feeling the author was going for but It's what I got from reading it.

grademaster
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It's nice to have a lighthearted story after the recent surge of dark, thought provoking novels. The most thought-provoking part of this story is the science of acting cute. Not especially horrifying content. It's nice, really, to relax with something well-written and reslly... Fluffy. Yeah, fluffy is a good way to describe this fic. I'm looking forwards to the magic, though. It seems surprisingly thought out considering how much this story focused on being cute and cuddly. 

Balipsol
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I started this out of curiosity and am very pleased that I did so. This is one of the few slice of life stories that keeps to being slice of life. Let the cute be with you ;) 

lomie0
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4.5, on style. Doesn't have a cute pet slime. Since slimes are the cutest monster, the story isn't as cute as it could potentially be! Could possibly have a tiny pet slime like a pet fish, and it being tiny would only make it even more cute.