The hopeless student in another world

by tehepero

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Drama Fantasy Romance Tragedy Harem Martial Arts

Kenshin Hashimoto, with a neat freak Obsessive Compulsive Disorder has grades in his studies higher than average and also the target of scorn of the popular group in his class. One normal day, his home room class was summoned to another world with magic, knights and also monsters. They were told they were the heroes who have been blessed with extraordinary abilities and pleaded to fight for them against their 'enemies'. The only problem is their classmate Kenshin Hashimoto has stats similar to commoners and is not of hero class or any class at all. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Weak to Strong, Betrayal, Resourceful lead, Smart lead, Revenge, Bullying, Growth, Fantasy, Transported to another world, Hard working lead, Adventure, Magic, ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Has bits and pieces from, Arifureta, Irregular student at magic high school («all of the principles of magic in this fanfic is made using this novel as the template)a , Dont fear the reaper, LMS.

 

Just a heads up, chapter releases are unpredictable. 

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Blackwing
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Incredibly hard to read.

 It’s very, very hard to read. There are run-on sentences galore, the characters are copy-paste from Arifureta/Suterareta, the capitalization and punctuation are bad, the spacing is poor, shall I keep going? It doesn’t seem just ‘inspired’ by Arifureta, it seems like you actually are just writing Arifureta with some tweaks. 2/5, hardly made it through chapter 1. I encourage you to keep going to improve, and I might just be Ultimate Cynic over here, but I just have a thing against Arifureta stuff for some reason.

OrangeShirt09
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I know that there are too many similarities, but I enjoy reading this so far. Please keep the chapters coming

Winter_Crows
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Not my cup of wine but could be yours

So this one isn't for me but I'm not going to hate it as at was a good read there are some very familiar elements from other books but not all the same so i really don't understand some of the other reviews but hey :/

 

yea this one isn't my cup of wine but hey it might be yours so don't knock it until you try it

carso
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oh right!!!!

lets see what you got!

  1. but : Please try to avoy an Arifureta plot....it getting reeeeeeally common over here (for not say anything else)
  2. And: carefull with the OCD, it an interesting trait for an MC but you have to develop the disorder to make it real and not confuse it with just being kinky... So you have to put it to an ANNOYING LEVEL OVER 9000
  3. And: put a kuudere that turns out to be a yandere!!! that would make a fun twist (or a glasses office girl at least pleaaaaaaase im begging ya!)

I had more to say but i forgot (probably not important??) anyway good luck 

 

Abandon all hope ye who enter here

fireworksguy
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title says it all! loving this fiction really good story plot so far please continue this you're very good at it!

Icemore
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I enjoyed reading it ! Keep the good work ?