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My world faced its end, but I refused to perish with it! So I intercepted a summoning ceremony from another world. One moment!? My summoner tried to summon a demon? Fuck it, I think it's better to break the contract and do my own thing... or not? Why is Mrs. Sacrifice hugging me? And why am I suddenly a child!? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I am not entirely sure how this fiction will turn out. And I am not sure on the tags either. They may change. Bear with it. As always, how chapters turn out is up to my mood.
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I wrote like a 20 min paragraph on how this story is so good/unique and hope to see more of it real soon, sadly it (my paragraph) got deleted half way through :””( so Ill just say this instead, IF YOU DON’T READ THIS YOUR MISSING OUT ON SOMETHING THAT’S WAYYYY TO UNDER APPRECIATED AND DESERVES A LOOOT MORE PUBLICITY. but so help me if something completely unexpected and not even hinted upon at this point like “Mc gets his girl preg but it ends up dead” Ill loose my shi*.
and what do you know 1 day later and it updates.
U have a gift for writing so don't worry about one and too mistakes cause u can only get better the sky's the limited so always aim high
AND DON'T JUST STOP THE STORY AN ALSO MAKE ME KNOW AND OTHER STORY U WRITE A LINK AT THE TOP WILL DO JUST FINE
the opening hooks good, it's create dark grim atmosphere but as chapter progress that dark atmosphere gradually lessen and gone somewhere replaced by dark humour that make stomach hurt, every chapter make you wonder what kind of development it will be presented
it is good story , nice humour, funky character, what else do you expect? it is beyond expectation indeed
Just like Until Death this is a really entertaining story with a small cast of characters that you come to come and love, the change in POV always feels refreshing even though they arent as in depth as in some of the other stories from Andur.
The FF as of this point (Chapter 21) has had some great development in both the world setting and character growth, and making truth to himself the author again has some huge timeskips that leave you feeling a little sad since most of the time it feels like something hilarious was going on.
As of now the story is advancing at a good pace along with the characters and it seems like we will again see another great romance from Andur.
I worked my way steadily through the story over the course of this evening and found it very enjoyable. Congratulations on making it into the top 50 and keep up the great work.
Fast releases, great grammar, good and an original story, great humor and overall an awesome work!
It's a nice read, it's funny and it doesn't feel forced like some stories do. Compared to many other fictions the grammar and spelling is exceptional. 5/5 as experience.
I’ll say, as expected of Andur :)
I’m assuming this is Ascathon, his slightly strange way of thinking is awesome as usual (and his strenght). The setting seems promising to me (more so than it seemed in Transcendence? from the beginning, and I still loved it) and I can’t wait to see how the story turns out ^^
As usual there’s barely any grammatical mistakes and if there are any they usually get fixed soon. I really like the author’s style and use of colours :)
Definitely my favourite author on RR.
If you’re can’t decide, check it out, I’d really recommend reading all of his FFs. Fun + awesome plot + unique and interesting characters and good grammar, what more could you want .
Edit: I must say that the story even exceeded my expectations :) Absolutely loved every single chapter; love MC’s personality!
I read 70+ chapters of this story. If you like smart dumb characters then this is the story for you. The story follows a matriarchal trend with a male MC. MC gets abused even though his magical abilities are lightyears ahead of everyone else. Oh yeah it starts magical fantasy and swiftly turns into a magic powered sci-fi story. Magic basically becomes cooler electricity. Oh yeah and fuck character development. The MC went from cool and in control to asperger’s reject. It would make sense from his past, but it just became a thing one chapter. When I first started reading I wondered why it ended at a little over 100 chapters. The final nail in the coffin was the unable to use powers trope. It was so fucking predictable I stopped reading and immediately wrote this review.
I love your stories, and this one seems as interesting as the others
I can’t wait to read what’s next ^^