Original COMPLETED Action Comedy Fantasy Psychological Romance School Life Slice of Life Supernatural
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Author's Comment:
I was asked about reading my work on other sites.
The answer is simple: Currently I am not active in any other networks than royalroadl.com. Only here, I correct mistakes and errors.

If you read it anywhere else and have to pay for it, or have to deal with an annoying amount of advertisement, You Are Being Betrayed.
You would do good if you make other people in that network aware of it. This is a free project of mine for the purpose of having fun. And if people try to make money with it you shouldn't bother visiting their website.

The only one whom I actually allowed to have my work on his website is Armaell who invested the time to compile them into pdf.
(http://armaell-library.net/author/andur)

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My world faced its end, but I refused to perish with it! So I intercepted a summoning ceremony from another world.
One moment!? My summoner tried to summon a demon? Fuck it, I think it's better to break the contract and do my own thing... or not? Why is Mrs. Sacrifice hugging me? And why am I suddenly a child!?

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I am not entirely sure how this fiction will turn out. And I am not sure on the tags either. They may change. Bear with it.
As always, how chapters turn out is up to my mood.
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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
1. ~Beyond the curtain.~ ago
2. ~Awakening.~ ago
3. ~Confirmation.~ ago
4. ~Language.~ ago
5. ~Stories.~ ago
6. ~Inspection.~ ago
7. ~Pecking order.~ ago
8. ~Paradise.~ ago
9. ~School.~ ago
10. ~Clique.~ ago
11. ~From day to day.~ ago
12. ~Test.~ ago
13. ~Opened Eyes.~ ago
14. ~Bad Omen.~ ago
15. ~Party.~ ago
16. ~University.~ ago
17. ~Suspicions.~ ago
18. ~Look the other way.~ ago
19. ~Just a part.~ ago
20. ~Going back.~ ago
21. ~Ice.~ ago
22. ~Rested.~ ago
23. ~Escape.~ ago
24. ~Daily life.~ ago
25. ~Problem and Solution?~ ago
26. ~Thrown out!~ ago
27. ~Invitation.~ ago
28. ~Party.~ ago
29. ~Tutor?~ ago
30. ~By other means.~ ago
31. ~Life.~ ago
32. ~Caught.~ ago
33. ~Work.~ ago
34. ~Return.~ ago
35. ~Visit.~ ago
36. ~A father's test.~ ago
37. ~Mayhem.~ ago
38. ~Just Students.~ ago
39. ~Secret.~ ago
40. ~Registration.~ ago
41. ~Research.~ ago
42. ~Misgivings.~ ago
43. ~Rage.~ ago
44. ~Hunt.~ ago
45. ~Assault.~ ago
46. ~Returned.~ ago
47. ~Memories and Oaths.~ ago
48. ~Misfit.~ ago
49. ~Secrets.~ ago
50. ~Sides.~ ago
51. ~One step behind.~ ago
52. ~Enlightenment.~ ago
53. ~Cold Calling.~ ago
54. ~Lies.~ ago
55. ~Flip a coin.~ ago
56. ~Uncovered.~ ago
57. ~New threats.~ ago
58. ~The Light.~ ago
59. ~New friends.~ ago
60. ~History.~ ago
61. ~Tight schedule.~ ago
62. ~Taking care.~ ago
63. ~Visitors.~ ago
64. ~Greetings.~ ago
65. ~Concourse.~ ago
66. ~Fortress.~ ago
67. ~Circumstances.~ ago
68. ~Adjournment.~ ago
69. ~Gatecrasher.~ ago
70. ~Statement.~ ago
71. ~Tradition.~ ago
72. ~Scorched.~ ago
73. ~Frustration.~ ago
74. ~A usual day.~ ago
75. ~The Traveller.~ ago
76. ~Intermission.~ ago
77. ~Good vs. Evil.~ ago
78. ~Ignorance.~ ago
79. ~Arrival.~ ago
80. ~Storytime.~ ago
81. ~Teachings.~ ago
82. ~Developments.~ ago
83. ~More than Enough.~ ago
84. ~Siege.~ ago
85. ~Tri.~ ago
86. ~Source.~ ago
87. ~Move In.~ ago
88. ~Freedom or Peace.~ ago
89. ~Research methods.~ ago
90. ~The other side.~ ago
91. ~Sightseeing.~ ago
92. ~Interlude.~ ago
93. ~Payment.~ ago
94. ~Uprising.~ ago
95. ~Abolition.~ ago
96. ~Cite.~ ago
97. ~Power Game.~ ago
98. ~Parole.~ ago
99. ~Tea time.~ ago
100. ~Theism.~ ago
101. ~Ignorance.~ ago
102. ~On the move.~ ago
103. ~Desperation and Hope.~ ago
104. ~Interlude.~ ago
105. ~Waiting.~ ago
106. ~First exchange.~ ago
107. ~Bail out.~ ago
108. ~Intermezzo.~ ago
109. ~Mysteries.~ ago
110. ~Preparations.~ ago
111. ~Centre.~ ago
112. ~Close Call.~ ago
113. ~Return.~ ago
114. ~Getaway.~ ago
115. ~History Lesson.~ ago
116. ~Fate.~ ago
117. ~Fin.~ ago
N. a. C. - Announcement ago
118. ~Epilogue.~ ago
Epub/Pdf-Version ago
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Medli
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I Just Kept reading.

I worked my way steadily through the story over the course of this evening and found it very enjoyable. Congratulations on making it into the top 50 and keep up the great work.

Altay545
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Just like Until Death this is a really entertaining story with a small cast of characters that you come to come and love, the change in POV always feels refreshing even though they arent as in depth as in some of the other stories from Andur.

The FF as of this point (Chapter 21) has had some great development in both the world setting and character growth, and making truth to himself the author again has some huge timeskips that leave you feeling a little sad since most of the time it feels like something hilarious was going on.

As of now the story is advancing at a good pace along with the characters and it seems like we will again see another great romance from Andur.

hmasterz
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read, have fun, enjoy it, that's all folks!

the opening hooks good,  it's create dark grim atmosphere but  as chapter progress that dark atmosphere gradually  lessen and gone somewhere replaced by dark humour that make  stomach hurt, every chapter make you wonder what kind of  development  it will be presented

 

it is good story , nice humour, funky  character,  what else do you expect? it is beyond expectation indeed

deathgear
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U have a gift for writing so don't worry about one and too mistakes cause u can only get better the sky's the limited so always aim high

AND DON'T JUST STOP THE STORY AN ALSO MAKE ME KNOW AND OTHER STORY U WRITE A LINK AT THE TOP WILL DO JUST FINE

 

momanz984
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 I wrote like a 20 min paragraph on how this story is so good/unique and hope to see more of it real soon, sadly it (my paragraph) got deleted half way through :””( so Ill just say this instead, IF YOU DON’T READ THIS YOUR MISSING OUT ON SOMETHING THAT’S WAYYYY TO UNDER APPRECIATED AND DESERVES A LOOOT MORE PUBLICITY. but so help me if something completely unexpected and not even hinted upon at this point like “Mc gets his girl preg but it ends up dead” Ill loose my shi*. 

 

 

and what do you know 1 day later and it updates.

Adc190
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Let's get to the point.

Another great fiction from Andur, arguably the best writer on RRL. I generally don't give 5 stars but this writer definitely deserves it. The writer of master pieces like Until Death? and Transcendence does deserve some praise after all. Now let's get to the point. 

 

Style: Undoubtedly appealing to the readers. Your words are never a burden to my eyes. Creative writing style and quite a few POVs which make the fiction more likeable. The POVs are not forced and you never feel that it wasn't needed. 5/5.

 

Story: The story is interesting. Your new fans will definitely fall in love with it. But for someone like me who has gone through your other fictions, I can't help but compare. I'm sorry but this ain't your best work. Its like coming second in class when you've already stood first. People who have got to know you recently would definitely be impressed. They are entitled to be. But I expect a lot more from you. This isn't a negative review. I just want to read something more amazing and I'm sure I will get to in the future. Until then its a 4/5.

 

Grammar: Decent use of words. Mistakes, only a few. But let's be honest here. You are not known for your grammar. 4/5.

 

Character: Azir and Stella are characters every reader will fall in love with. You can't bring yourself to hate them. The story revolves around them, completely. If there is anything which you'll find not lacking in any of Andur's works, its definitely the Character development. 5/5.

 

To all the "new" RRL fans reading this review, you shouldn't read this fiction. First you read Until Death? and Transcendence by the same writer, the one and only, Andur. Trust me, you will automatically come to reading this fic after you have gone through those two. 

This fiction is definitely a RRL gem. Unfortunately the great author of this fiction has already delivered master pieces which makes this one  look paler in comparison. That's "MY" opinion.

 

Btw my favorite one is Transcendence.

Skierus
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I love this story. I hope this is helpful for the author.

Okay this is my first review ever so im just gonna go ahead and point out my likes an dislikes about this story. Btw anything in () is just me talking towards the author and interruping the flow of my review >~> dont judge

 

likes: the story has an interesting begining that makes me want to continue reading. I also enjoy your attitude towards people correcting grammar or pointing out things that don't make sense... (Celestial stop sneaking in there lmao.) Fast updates! Gives me plenty to read in my free time that a pluss no matter what! (Though it would be best to take a break every now and then and be sure you have a planned out plot and filler chapter ideas for buying time. Though i say filler but you can (as in would be nice but not needed) throw in some character development or foreshadowing) next i do enjoy the personality of the mc though he is still mostly mysterious  to me so it feels like watch a cool guy do cool stuff more than feeling like im in his place struggling with him. (that is not a bad thing unless you didn't want to give that vibe.) okay i'll stop here cause i dont want to discuss plot. (Me no like spoilers in reviews :P)

 

Dislikes: I dislike how the family views the mc as if there is only two options love or hate (btw hate isnt an opposite of love you can care for a person you dislike.) some of the relationships could be more.. Complex. I hate time skips where nothing interesting happens cause it is hard for me to believe nothing interesting happened especially in these kinds of stories (personal opinion take with grain of salt) before and after time skip personalities havent changed much at all annoying people kept being annoying. People with little back story stayed with little backstory For a while i still know nothing about most characters besides things like they like flashy spells or they are perverted, smart yet naive, and basic descriptions one or two character roles feel forced (you dont notice unless you take the time to think about why that person would even have developed in that way though you do give rough clues pointing to reasons for it.. But still its rough and kind of glazed over.) besides that lack of eyebrows raised at mc opness i can't think of anything else maybe its just my bais of loving this story keeping me from being more critical..

 

Well hope this helps you improve your writing. Sorry if it doesnt. Btw the reason you dont get 5stars is cause well i dont give 5 stars to anything cause perfection is a lie lol.

Temz
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very good.... Expecting more chapter

The fanfic is very good; I can't find any fault in it so far.  I like the MC, but I'my wondering if you could fit an harem into the flow of the story since the plot seems to be going in that direction.  My opinion though, you're  free to ignore it if it does not fit into the plot. Also,  please increase the length of the chapters. TThanks and keep up the good work Andur-sama. 

Oldsin
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Incredibly interesting.

Great story. I especially enjoy the MC ‘so origin and how terrible was taken. Powered through the story and haven’t found a single mistake on the writing. I especially enjoyed how the author actually color coated the different characters it made for a pleasant change of pace. I’m looking forward to how the story plays out.  Thank you

Bearcat
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Solid work here, Andur!

Really enjoying the way you’ve written the main character and your world building. Style and control of English are top notch as well- keep it coming!