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My world faced its end, but I refused to perish with it! So I intercepted a summoning ceremony from another world. One moment!? My summoner tried to summon a demon? Fuck it, I think it's better to break the contract and do my own thing... or not? Why is Mrs. Sacrifice hugging me? And why am I suddenly a child!? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I am not entirely sure how this fiction will turn out. And I am not sure on the tags either. They may change. Bear with it. As always, how chapters turn out is up to my mood.
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I'll plainly state it that I don't think the plot takes itself seriously. Not to say it's a joke or bad, but if you're looking for a super serious read, where the characters are fighting tooth-and-nail through some convoluted struggle, this isn't it.
It IS, however, enjoyable to read and updates (usually) daily.
Andur has it down, with this being his third(I think it is?) fic. A first-person POV, that uses several characters every now and then besides the MC. It's "clean" and it works. Not much else to say.
I wouldn't call it original, as the author had a fic similar to this one before, but I would say that this one is better written. It is, plainly said, the life of the MC in his new world with his new family and new country. He (mostly) does what he wants and curb-stomps anyone that tries to mess with his day-to-day life. It's funny as hell where the MC introduces all sorts of technology to his new world and personally out smarts and out wits all of his adversaries. It is difficult to against a guy that has 700+ years of life in a world that was more advance than yours.
Some errors here and there, but the commenters help Andur out and correct them and he edits them quite quickly.
Same "complaint" as the story. The Azir and Stella (The two most recurring characters) are quite similar to his previous story, except improved and better. There is nothing "deep" about this story and Azir has no real struggle with his character as he knows who he his, so he won't waste time deliberating on whether he should do this or that. He would simply use the easiest method available to him. Is there "character development"? Um... sure, if you count Stella trying to convince her husband not to eat chocolate that was dropped on the ground. Stella has most character development IMO, as she went from sweet childhood friend to being a not-quite-there-mad-scientist like her husband. I mean, she experiments on her own body!
I dont have any problem with the grammar the plot is amazing and the story is unique and hilarius especially the MC childish side and interracrtion with the other kids
i did found the love interst in the begining cliche but as i read i realize it totally different than what i imagined to be and those plot suprise made the story go from good to very good
Thank you for this amazing story and i anticipate more progress character wise especially his kids.
this is probably my favorite story on the site and one of the best i have had the pleasure to stumble upon.
the characters are well written and funny, and it's not all sunshine and rainbows for the protagonist. bad things can and will happen.
the story is slow moving at first but definitely necessary for character development.
action and comedy are there in abundance and are well balanced in the story
and last but definitely not least, it's not your run of the mill you're dropped in the middle ages have some magic and swords now fight dragons kind of fantasy, it's interesting.
well hope this review will help a few people pick it up and enjoy it as much as i do :)
Great story, very enjoyable and interesting...if you read the author's other work you will come to find similarities, yet compare with the other two this one has a different vibe to it. Both of the other stories are enjoyable as well but it's nice to see a change of pace even though their are similarities
This is one of the best stories out there. I recommend it to everyone.
It's clear to me from the beginning that Beyond, Transcendence and Until Death were one packaged story. It's been written in reverse, the ending was written first. In short it was the story of reincarnation cycle of one person which is the savior of the world. How their live and love fate keeps on repeating and so on, too bad Andur didn't finished Transcendence because if he did the trio will be a complete book ready for publishing.
A little bit spoiler pooper, if anyone didn't knew, well now you knew. It's the story of the villain origin, the great calamity in the making. Anybody want more spoiler?
BTW Andur, YOU GOT A FREAKIN BIG ASS LOOP HOLE between Transcendence and Beyond, before you finishing Transcendence you better reread and check it again. I won't tell it here, it'll be a real party pooper if I did,... But I'll give you a hint, it's about the great calamity circumstances.
Mystery Quest:find the missing plot hole
-there is a hole in the history plot, find it before it brings a great calamity to the world.
REWARD: cookie,,, lots lots of cookies. Oh and potatoes too!
I like reading the Author's work. In every Book, I always try to guess the characters base on their Mannerism, attitude,likes! and dislikes, and Names too! from the previous works and I know some people who read the first 2 books tried those too! I Thank the author for always giving good stories, not stopping even for having many "Bullies?" lets just call them bullies whos Hunger for "Perfect Story for them" and I dont really hate them for it, I know they just have different taste. Still, I encourage everybody to Try reading the Author's works. It always End and no Dropping of stories :)
The Story is Awesome
Thank you, I really enjoyed reading though this..
I came away from this story disappointing because it's intro is basically a lie. It's very well written and he does a good job of creating characters but it never goes anywhere or does anything to keep our interest. It quickly becomes just another bored generic protagonist excels at everything and does whatever he wants. Which is apparently just to hang around torturing school children hugging his family.
Strange for a teenager that used to be some kind of ogre archmage or something.
We get an assassin/spy plot that fails utterly to be anything but a tool for the main character to show off with and seemingly endless school or family drama. None of which held my attention, probably because it was so slow, cliche and predictable.
really good story, but... why in every your novel male mc is a pussy, and female is a dick? Until death, Transcendence. now Beyond. Its irritating and already boring. Male magic&industry oriented geek and female crazy bitch who bully him all the time. Love, yeah... And children. They are actionkillers in novels, so imo its stupid idea