Beyond?

I read 70+ chapters of this story. If you like smart dumb characters then this is the story for you. The story follows a matriarchal trend with a male MC. MC gets abused even though his magical abilities are lightyears ahead of everyone else. Oh yeah it starts magical fantasy and swiftly turns into a magic powered sci-fi story. Magic basically becomes cooler electricity. Oh yeah and fuck character development. The MC went from cool and in control to asperger’s reject. It would make sense from his past, but it just became a thing one chapter. When I first started reading I wondered why it ended at a little over 100 chapters. The final nail in the coffin was the unable to use powers trope. It was so fucking predictable I stopped reading and immediately wrote this review. 

Ascathon wouldn't cling to life as much as this guy does. After all, it'd just start all over again!

Possibly an incarnation after a complete memory wipe, but this feels like a different person in many ways.

Either way, I really like the setting and I'm excited to see this new work :)! Wonder where it's going to end up, too, of course, but we'll see that in time! 

like always awesome interactions between the characters

best mothercharacter of all your stories

hillarious race(that eggscene HAHA)

and the romance will definetly become again like always funny and sweet

so far great

want more

I definitely like how the story is turning out so far, Azir, while very similar to him,  is very different from Ascathon in some things(like the part where he actually give a fuck about being alive). I was afraid after the appearance Ingrid that it was going to follow the same path as your other stories to much for me to fully enjoy it but meby Stella can be a new love interest and help make this story not another rerun of Untill Death? I am loving it so far, thanks for giving us another one!

Not really a whole lot that I can say here.  The overall quality is on par with the author's other two works.  The basic setup is better then what we saw with the other ones as well.  The characters are interesting though there are the stereotypes that seem to have been used as a base.

The MC's in all three stories seem to be the same in their character types as well as their methodologies.  The primary love interest is the same chemist/bioengeneer that her counterpart in the previous incarnations are.  The MC is the fiddling technowizard which is the same as his counterparts.  The main difference that I see is the additional characters that are potential love interests as well, or at least who want to be in that role.  They offer great options on where to go.

Couldn't stop reading hope to see more soon

It's a nice read, it's funny and it doesn't feel forced like some stories do. Compared to many other fictions the grammar and spelling is exceptional. 5/5 as experience.

Fast releases, great grammar, good and an original story, great humor and overall an awesome work!

I worked my way steadily through the story over the course of this evening and found it very enjoyable. Congratulations on making it into the top 50 and keep up the great work.

Just like Until Death this is a really entertaining story with a small cast of characters that you come to come and love, the change in POV always feels refreshing even though they arent as in depth as in some of the other stories from Andur.

The FF as of this point (Chapter 21) has had some great development in both the world setting and character growth, and making truth to himself the author again has some huge timeskips that leave you feeling a little sad since most of the time it feels like something hilarious was going on.

As of now the story is advancing at a good pace along with the characters and it seems like we will again see another great romance from Andur.