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Author's Comment: I was asked about reading my work on other sites. The answer is simple: Currently I am not active in any other networks than royalroadl.com. Only here, I correct mistakes and errors. If you read it anywhere else and have to pay for it, or have to deal with an annoying amount of advertisement, You Are Being Betrayed. You would do good if you make other people in that network aware of it. This is a free project of mine for the purpose of having fun. And if people try to make money with it you shouldn't bother visiting their website. The only one whom I actually allowed to have my work on his website is Armaell who invested the time to compile them into pdf. (http://armaell-library.net/author/andur) ———————————————————————————————
My world faced its end, but I refused to perish with it! So I intercepted a summoning ceremony from another world. One moment!? My summoner tried to summon a demon? Fuck it, I think it's better to break the contract and do my own thing... or not? Why is Mrs. Sacrifice hugging me? And why am I suddenly a child!? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I am not entirely sure how this fiction will turn out. And I am not sure on the tags either. They may change. Bear with it. As always, how chapters turn out is up to my mood.
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like always awesome interactions between the characters
best mothercharacter of all your stories
hillarious race(that eggscene HAHA)
and the romance will definetly become again like always funny and sweet
so far great
I definitely like how the story is turning out so far, Azir, while very similar to him, is very different from Ascathon in some things(like the part where he actually give a fuck about being alive). I was afraid after the appearance Ingrid that it was going to follow the same path as your other stories to much for me to fully enjoy it but meby Stella can be a new love interest and help make this story not another rerun of Untill Death? I am loving it so far, thanks for giving us another one!
love your stories, so interesting and enjoyable. Best part is that i can barely see any grammar errors or none at all most of the times.
Unlike all those top fictions on this website, your stories are the only one that doesn't make my vein pop from their poor literacy level.
Okay this is my first review ever so im just gonna go ahead and point out my likes an dislikes about this story. Btw anything in () is just me talking towards the author and interruping the flow of my review >~> dont judge
likes: the story has an interesting begining that makes me want to continue reading. I also enjoy your attitude towards people correcting grammar or pointing out things that don't make sense... (Celestial stop sneaking in there lmao.) Fast updates! Gives me plenty to read in my free time that a pluss no matter what! (Though it would be best to take a break every now and then and be sure you have a planned out plot and filler chapter ideas for buying time. Though i say filler but you can (as in would be nice but not needed) throw in some character development or foreshadowing) next i do enjoy the personality of the mc though he is still mostly mysterious to me so it feels like watch a cool guy do cool stuff more than feeling like im in his place struggling with him. (that is not a bad thing unless you didn't want to give that vibe.) okay i'll stop here cause i dont want to discuss plot. (Me no like spoilers in reviews :P)
Dislikes: I dislike how the family views the mc as if there is only two options love or hate (btw hate isnt an opposite of love you can care for a person you dislike.) some of the relationships could be more.. Complex. I hate time skips where nothing interesting happens cause it is hard for me to believe nothing interesting happened especially in these kinds of stories (personal opinion take with grain of salt) before and after time skip personalities havent changed much at all annoying people kept being annoying. People with little back story stayed with little backstory For a while i still know nothing about most characters besides things like they like flashy spells or they are perverted, smart yet naive, and basic descriptions one or two character roles feel forced (you dont notice unless you take the time to think about why that person would even have developed in that way though you do give rough clues pointing to reasons for it.. But still its rough and kind of glazed over.) besides that lack of eyebrows raised at mc opness i can't think of anything else maybe its just my bais of loving this story keeping me from being more critical..
Well hope this helps you improve your writing. Sorry if it doesnt. Btw the reason you dont get 5stars is cause well i dont give 5 stars to anything cause perfection is a lie lol.
Ascathon wouldn't cling to life as much as this guy does. After all, it'd just start all over again!
Possibly an incarnation after a complete memory wipe, but this feels like a different person in many ways.
Either way, I really like the setting and I'm excited to see this new work :)! Wonder where it's going to end up, too, of course, but we'll see that in time!
Another great fiction from Andur, arguably the best writer on RRL. I generally don't give 5 stars but this writer definitely deserves it. The writer of master pieces like Until Death? and Transcendence does deserve some praise after all. Now let's get to the point.
Style: Undoubtedly appealing to the readers. Your words are never a burden to my eyes. Creative writing style and quite a few POVs which make the fiction more likeable. The POVs are not forced and you never feel that it wasn't needed. 5/5.
Story: The story is interesting. Your new fans will definitely fall in love with it. But for someone like me who has gone through your other fictions, I can't help but compare. I'm sorry but this ain't your best work. Its like coming second in class when you've already stood first. People who have got to know you recently would definitely be impressed. They are entitled to be. But I expect a lot more from you. This isn't a negative review. I just want to read something more amazing and I'm sure I will get to in the future. Until then its a 4/5.
Grammar: Decent use of words. Mistakes, only a few. But let's be honest here. You are not known for your grammar. 4/5.
Character: Azir and Stella are characters every reader will fall in love with. You can't bring yourself to hate them. The story revolves around them, completely. If there is anything which you'll find not lacking in any of Andur's works, its definitely the Character development. 5/5.
To all the "new" RRL fans reading this review, you shouldn't read this fiction. First you read Until Death? and Transcendence by the same writer, the one and only, Andur. Trust me, you will automatically come to reading this fic after you have gone through those two.
This fiction is definitely a RRL gem. Unfortunately the great author of this fiction has already delivered master pieces which makes this one look paler in comparison. That's "MY" opinion.
Btw my favorite one is Transcendence.
I liked the concept of the story. But it feels 2 dimensional. There no real connection to the characters.
Unless you are unfamiliar with author's other fictions, this follows the style of the previous works with great characters and setting.
Action, comedy, romance and sometimes drama. What I really like about it are the ideas and their execution in this story.
I powered through all of it today. Keep up the good work!
Interesting story but the main reason for my score is your romance with A... and S..... it's refreshing, fun and lovely.
I could feel their love throught your words ;)