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Author's Comment: I was asked about reading my work on other sites. The answer is simple: Currently I am not active in any other networks than royalroadl.com. Only here, I correct mistakes and errors. If you read it anywhere else and have to pay for it, or have to deal with an annoying amount of advertisement, You Are Being Betrayed. You would do good if you make other people in that network aware of it. This is a free project of mine for the purpose of having fun. And if people try to make money with it you shouldn't bother visiting their website. The only one whom I actually allowed to have my work on his website is Armaell who invested the time to compile them into pdf. (http://armaell-library.net/author/andur) ———————————————————————————————
My world faced its end, but I refused to perish with it! So I intercepted a summoning ceremony from another world. One moment!? My summoner tried to summon a demon? Fuck it, I think it's better to break the contract and do my own thing... or not? Why is Mrs. Sacrifice hugging me? And why am I suddenly a child!? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I am not entirely sure how this fiction will turn out. And I am not sure on the tags either. They may change. Bear with it. As always, how chapters turn out is up to my mood.
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like always awesome interactions between the characters
best mothercharacter of all your stories
hillarious race(that eggscene HAHA)
and the romance will definetly become again like always funny and sweet
so far great
I definitely like how the story is turning out so far, Azir, while very similar to him, is very different from Ascathon in some things(like the part where he actually give a fuck about being alive). I was afraid after the appearance Ingrid that it was going to follow the same path as your other stories to much for me to fully enjoy it but meby Stella can be a new love interest and help make this story not another rerun of Untill Death? I am loving it so far, thanks for giving us another one!
love your stories, so interesting and enjoyable. Best part is that i can barely see any grammar errors or none at all most of the times.
Unlike all those top fictions on this website, your stories are the only one that doesn't make my vein pop from their poor literacy level.
Ascathon wouldn't cling to life as much as this guy does. After all, it'd just start all over again!
Possibly an incarnation after a complete memory wipe, but this feels like a different person in many ways.
Either way, I really like the setting and I'm excited to see this new work :)! Wonder where it's going to end up, too, of course, but we'll see that in time!
Writing style is good and I didn't see any grammar mistakes, but characters are really bad.
Mc is old man(Almost last living human on his home planet, really strong magician) but thinks like this: "This is scary lady, I don't like scary lady"(And this is from mc POV). He is supposed to be old man, smart, or at least smarter than 1 year old kids. But no, I thought wrong.
So I only can give this story 3 stars, because it feels like japanese comedic light novels with dumb MC. If you like novels like that, then this story is for you.
Unless you are unfamiliar with author's other fictions, this follows the style of the previous works with great characters and setting.
Action, comedy, romance and sometimes drama. What I really like about it are the ideas and their execution in this story.
I powered through all of it today. Keep up the good work!
Interesting story but the main reason for my score is your romance with A... and S..... it's refreshing, fun and lovely.
I could feel their love throught your words ;)
Okay this is my first review ever so im just gonna go ahead and point out my likes an dislikes about this story. Btw anything in () is just me talking towards the author and interruping the flow of my review >~> dont judge
likes: the story has an interesting begining that makes me want to continue reading. I also enjoy your attitude towards people correcting grammar or pointing out things that don't make sense... (Celestial stop sneaking in there lmao.) Fast updates! Gives me plenty to read in my free time that a pluss no matter what! (Though it would be best to take a break every now and then and be sure you have a planned out plot and filler chapter ideas for buying time. Though i say filler but you can (as in would be nice but not needed) throw in some character development or foreshadowing) next i do enjoy the personality of the mc though he is still mostly mysterious to me so it feels like watch a cool guy do cool stuff more than feeling like im in his place struggling with him. (that is not a bad thing unless you didn't want to give that vibe.) okay i'll stop here cause i dont want to discuss plot. (Me no like spoilers in reviews :P)
Dislikes: I dislike how the family views the mc as if there is only two options love or hate (btw hate isnt an opposite of love you can care for a person you dislike.) some of the relationships could be more.. Complex. I hate time skips where nothing interesting happens cause it is hard for me to believe nothing interesting happened especially in these kinds of stories (personal opinion take with grain of salt) before and after time skip personalities havent changed much at all annoying people kept being annoying. People with little back story stayed with little backstory For a while i still know nothing about most characters besides things like they like flashy spells or they are perverted, smart yet naive, and basic descriptions one or two character roles feel forced (you dont notice unless you take the time to think about why that person would even have developed in that way though you do give rough clues pointing to reasons for it.. But still its rough and kind of glazed over.) besides that lack of eyebrows raised at mc opness i can't think of anything else maybe its just my bais of loving this story keeping me from being more critical..
Well hope this helps you improve your writing. Sorry if it doesnt. Btw the reason you dont get 5stars is cause well i dont give 5 stars to anything cause perfection is a lie lol.
I don't like this book, it had a lot of potential at the start, but it just fell flat and became more of the same.
If you are interested in characters who don't fit the usual cliché personality tropes then this isn't the story for you.