Awakening Chronicles

by Kyrie

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Sci-fi Anti-Hero Lead GameLit Gender Bender Grimdark High Fantasy LitRPG Non-Human lead Slice of Life
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After dying quietly in his sleep, Marcus awakens and finds out he has been selected to become A World Administrator. A being who stands amongst the gods and whose job is to raise worlds from nothing and help life flourish. However, not everything is as it seems. Some of the Administrators want to see everything torn asunder while others only exist to bring pain and misery. Will Marcus adapt to his new life in this cold universe, or will he fall prey to the villans living in the darkest corners of the universe?

Authors Note: Hey guys, this is my first real attempt at writing, especially for a genre like this. It will include many Lit Rpg elements, world-building, and a variety of other topics. With that being said, this will be a long series that I wish to update regularly. It will be a bit on the dark side, so fair warning. If you see anything you do not like, IE: Grammar, strange sentence structure or the characters seem bland, leave a comment or shoot me a message so I can correct the issue. 

Upload schedule: 1-3 times weekly, maybe more if I can get some chapters sandbagged.

*This series and universe are protected under copyright, so if you wish to use it, just pm me or join my discord and ask. 

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CandyAddict
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The story is similar to other creation stories (Breathe of Creation, World Keeper, Overseer), but brings enough to the table to be unique and enjoyable.

The mechanics are flexible, and the world building is well done, with room for further expansion. There also seems to be plans in place for several arcs in the future, showing that the story is unlikely to be abandoned anytime soon.

The writing is well done, and easy to read while being detailed enough to give readers a good image.

The only real issue is the main character. Side characters seem fairly fleshed out and unique, but the protagonist just doesn't really feel very good. He has frequent mood shifts, reacts oddly/inconsistently to different events, doesn't really seem to use his powers/circumstances effectively, and doesnt really ask for more information either. The latter may quickly turn it into an info dump, but there are certain things that anyone would ask, like (with minimal spoilers) how long the protection period lasts or the exact details of what it entails.

There are also several minor but kinda frequent typos.

Jinx Beast
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Good book with tons of potential

Reviewed at: Chapter 13.1 Primal Age

Honestly I have to say I've never seen someone go into such detail about character creation, which is amazing! I feel this book could be one of the most detailed/indepth litrpg/world creation books I have read on this site, but I also feel like this book could get repetitive if the author goes the wrong direction with the story. But as of now i'm fully enjoying the story and can't wait for more chapters!!

Aetholite
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Very interesting setting, the premise is very unique. There is no bigger plot as of yet, but it has been hinted at already. The side characters have their own little quirks which I find quite refreshing.

The mc is not some OP dude that knows everything, he is actaully still learning how all of this works.

Im looking forward to seeing where this goes.

 

Definetely recommend checking this out.

Violent Nexus
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Do you like an actually good and creative world-building novel? Welcome to this perfect novel. 

 

Also please, more chaps, please.

Omnis Ra
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I like this take on the hero summon/reincarnation genre. It did start off kinda dragging but i was drawn into reading it. I loved the characters. The story was satisfying and I couldn't quit reading. This was a fantastic story to find.

DestroyerMon
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It has a lot of detail it really allows you to visualize exactly what is going on. the author listens to any typo you point out or error in his writing and will fix it as soon as he has time. it has the potential to be a really great and long-lasting story. though there are people who say that the author is copying world keeper, at this current point of time I haven't read it, I tried to read it but couldn't really get hooked into reading it but this one managed to do it. the author will ask people in his discord for ideas and will actually implement them and will ask people whether certain things are a good idea to implement into the story or if something needs more detail and what type of detail needed to be added. I am looking forward to reading more as it comes out. for everyone who is reading this please join the discord it needs more people who are active!

Dominus Proxi
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A nice idea that has a huge potential, and it is greatly executed aswell ! What more can you ask for ? Well... chapters...

 

Jk. Anyway good novel. I really like it. I hope it will be very long lmao. It can be. I just hope not to be intergalactic administrators coming right after life was created. I think there needs to be semi-long arc of him observing his world and if need be, intervene. But thats up to u. Anyway, perfect novel.

NutellaDips
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hi&hello
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It has potential and I for it to live up to it, I'm not sure how likely that is to happen. He story thus far has been simplistic which isn't in it's self bad. The MC has made some reckace and poor choices but he's also recognized this and is trying to improve (ie. character growth) which is great throw he's also quite plain so that's nothing new. The grammar is great and the style gets the job done without pulling you out of the story. Over all it's fun, has potential, just simple...

I think this gripe is more a me thing considering I had enough a background in anthropology which is why I'm so into cool word building and civilization building story's but what I've seen so for is lacking... for lack of better word, yes, pun intended). The view on culture reflected in the story smells like early table top rpg fantasy that took the ring lessons from Tolkien mixed with late 19 century arm chair anthropology trying to apply darwinistic theory to raceism, culture, the class system, and (the holy mother of all) colonialism.

it's not as bad as all that, I'm just overly sensitized to this kind of analysis, but the currents of it ar there.

but the story isn't quite in stride yet so I'll be keeping an eye on it and maybe it will become something great, I honestly hope it will and don't think that's too far a stretch.

 

note: I'm not sure how much actual civilization and world building will be in this, so my criticism my not be the most salient: there's some big war on the horizon that looks promising andthat doesn't really relate, though the world being too simple to feel real remains an issue I guess.

Andross Guile
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 It's well written and all but it stole too much for a high rating. World Keeper's better than this...until it deteriorates. This is alright but there's little to no originality.