Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse with a Genocidal System

by OneInchBlade

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Horror Satire Anti-Hero Lead GameLit Grimdark LitRPG Low Fantasy Magic Male Lead Martial Arts Multiple Lead Characters Post Apocalyptic School Life Strong Lead Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity

Zombie Apocalypse meets the Gamer, as the new technoganic alien parasites invade Earth, bringing along with it with the System we know and love.

Inspired by the Gamer of the Dead and Zombie Xianxia.

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Spoom
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(first review)
I could just barely make it past the first half of the first chapter when I had to quit, I thought I was reading google translate after translating 76 times.

 

edit: looked at the latest chapter (21) and the grammar went from 1 out of 100 to 3 so it's better, but only slightly

Zach Horsman
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 The grammar is terrible, and the writer goes way too far into unecessary details or information, going as far to repeat things in the very next sentence, or even in the same sentence.