Val Verde: Legend of the Supreme Leader

by Silver Lucky

Fan Fiction ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Sci-fi Harem Male Lead Ruling Class Slice of Life Strategy Super Heroes War and Military
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My name is Johnny Rico, and I was born to an island that has rarely seen good times.

Between the machinations of Hydra, the greed of Cobra, and the do well intervention of the Justice League, or the Avengers. Val Verde has suffered.

I have obtained the coveted title of the Supreme Leader. All of Val Verde is mine to command. Yet I have also inherited every problem that the previous Supreme Leader had neglected.

It is as they say, there is no foundation quite like rock bottom.

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RationalMind
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Story is very good. The main character feels very real.

I get that this is a 'slice of life' kind of story. But most chapter we see MC being made someone's bitch. Everyone knows MC will get powers at some point. Atleast give us some hint how he will get the power (we are already 16 chapters in without any hint). Otherwise the story may become stale.

I'm not telling you to make this story a powerwank. But still, such a good story with actual characters (instead of cardboard cutouts) without powers in a world of Gods and Demons feels incomplete.

Jangofet54
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Welcome to the wonderful world of DC meets Marvel. You've got Cobra, you've got Hydra, you've got Batman and the Justice Leauge, you've got The Mighty Avengers, aaaaaannnnnnddd you've got a nation once-prosperous now standing at the brink.

Enter the Supreme Leader. A man who deeply cares about his people and is looking to rebuild and improve his nation.

Overall a really good novel and a fairly unique viewpoint on a world dominated by superpowers. I wholeheartedly endorse and recommend this novel.  

Dodikdov
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Delicious and Nutritious!

Reviewed at: Chapter 02

So good! Great fan-fic, like how it mixes both (questioningly?) GI-Joe and the Avengers. SO good! Absolutely yummy too. Nice descriptions.