Cursed Alter (First Draft)

by DAStewart

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Historical Anti-Hero Lead Female Lead Magic Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters Secret Identity Strong Lead Supernatural
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An aspiring blacksmith leaves his hometown for an apprenticeship. However, when he meets a band of adventurers, he joins them in a quest to defeat the prime wizard and save the princess!

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Schuldraigh
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Wrong summary, wrong title

Reviewed at: Chapter 3

Current chapter: 3

A novel with potential, just not the one the title and description lead you to think it is. Title and description lead you to believe that MC is a blacksmith with minimal experience and will eventually involve a curse. The MC is actually a baker, volunteer guard, and successfully killed a DRAGON somehow (even in cannon no one knows how). Still interesting, just not what you advertised. 

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